don't leave

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Takon (01), Sep 30, 2011.

  1. Walking down the streets drake puts his hands In his new leather jacket and felt for his keys
    Drake: oh come on where are they I have to go home before cerfew
    He looks around and sees he's all alone and the streets are empty even the main street of Chad is empty a first time since he's been alive he finally finds his brand new ford mustang, jet black and lighting fast he hops in and finally finds his keys putting them in the ignition and starting the car hearing the roar of the engine


    ?
     
  2. Feels the strength of the car and puts it into first gear and takes off feeling the power in his feet driving home drake thinks of the cute girl that sits next to him during algebra and thinks if only I had a chance with her
     
  3.  super good
     
  4. Should I keep going?
     
  5. Keep going. 
     
  6. Driving home he can't get his head of the girl he thinks about her more and more she takes his memory and he feels lost as he puls into his blue house up the steep drive way into the dark garage
    Drake: I hope they are asleep
    Walks into the house as quiet as I can looking around softly trying to get to his room in the basement
     
  7. Drake sneaks into his room and lays in his bed all he can think about is the girl the way her hair falls the way her smile brightens his day the way her eyes show him what he thinks is love but can't be sure should I?
     
  8. He lays in bed slowly falling asleep when he hears a crash he shoots out of bed and picks up his dagger from his nightstand and slowly walks out of his room he hears a loud bang and another crash and walks up stairs cautiously he opens the door to see his mom and dad laying there shot in the head with bloodied foot prints walking to the stairs
    Drake: No No No
    He runs up stairs and hears a crash and she pounds into his sisters room head spinning heart pounding he sees a theif holding a gun to his sisters head
     
  9. He lays in bed slowly falling asleep when he hears a crash he shoots out of bed and picks up his dagger from his nightstand and slowly walks out of his room he hears a loud bang and another crash and walks up stairs cautiously he opens the door to see his mom and dad laying there shot in the head with bloodied foot prints walking to the stairs
    Drake: No No No
    He runs up stairs and hears a crash and she pounds into his sisters room head spinning heart pounding he sees a theif holding a gun to his sisters head
     
  10. Srry about the double post but should I continue?
     
  11. YES!!!!!! 
     
  12. Mmhm. Takon you should
     
  13. Drake- I beg you don't hurt her plz she's the only one who..
    Bang!! The shoot rings out as a roll of thunder after lighting he saw his little sisters body slump to the ground and he felll to his knees
    Drake- I guess I'm next...
    The theif smiles and walked away leaving him untouched unscathed only he had to know his family was dead and not coming back he feel to his face and cried the first time in years it felt weird but good to him so he cried harder then the phone rang
     
  14. He walked to the phone still crying
    Drake it's Carly are you ok
    Carly that's her name the girl with the soft brown eyes blonde hair and soft skin the girl that sits next to me in algebra the girl that I'm falling for
    Drake no i have to call the police Carly my my families dead
    He slams the phone down and picks it back up dileing 911
    911 emergency what is ur emergence
    Drake my house was just broken into my familys been shot
     
  15. hurry more plz 
     
  16. He clicks the phone off and collapses broken and hurt the next thing he hears is the sirens then he passes out
    Drake where am I
    He awakes in a starle white room and can't see any one
    Carly drake plz wake up plz dont leave me
    Drake sits up and sees Carly next to him and hugs her he gets out of the bed and holds her close
    Drake I hate hospitals take me home plz Carly
    Carly this is were u need to be you were stabbed in the back and watched your family died plz stay and don't leav
    He sits on the bed and pulls her on his lap
    Drake you know i like you right Carly?
     
  17. Please Please Please continue!!! 
     
  18. Carly turns bright red and looks at him
    Carly you do?
    Drake ya but right now I got to go home pls Carly plz
    Carly fine but I'm staying with you and I'm not leavening
    Drake nods and stands up walking to the door then turns to her
    D: Carly let's go plz I want to be there when they...
    C: don't worry drake they already moved them
    He brakes down infront of her and starts crying hard falling to his knees she walks over to him her brown hair flowing behind her she picks up his head
    C: don't cry I'm here
    D: i know it just painful
    C: don't worry I'll stay by your side the whole time
    She leans down and kisses him softly
    He kisses her back feeling her soft lips aginst him