The Battle Of Liberty

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by CrimeFightingCactus, Sep 24, 2011.

  1. Ok, Soooooooooo, I made this story last night and I was a bit pissed since everybody ignored the thread. Luckily I got 3 great comments. check out my first story before you read this.

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    Chapter 1

    "Fire!" Captain Michel commanded. "I have better aim when I'm pissing." Captain Michel murmured. "Fire!" Captain Michel commanded again. "Better." Captain Michel complimented. "oh looky here, General Separd is here." I thought to myself. "Captain! Front and center, Now." General Separd asked. "What Sir...." Captain Michel asked. "There have been reports of enemy activity over in the southeast. Would you think your team is ready to be deployed?" General Separd asked. "No sir, Not yet." Captain Michel. "Well then. Have them ready in 3 weeks, or you shall face the consequences." General Separd trail off. "Yes sir!" Captain Michel said loud and clear. "Good." General said as he walked away. "Fire!" Captain Michel Commanded. "Trainings over for the day." "Head back to the barracks." Captain Michel said quietly. As I was laying in bed I wondered, Will i ever get to see my family? What will happen if we are not ready for deployment in 2 weeks? What will happen to Captain Michel? That's all I can think about.

    Thanks for reading!! tell me what you think below Read the prologue Cya
     
  2. Ooooo....MIchel Got a task on his hand? action stations baby!!....And u knw what i am good at aiming while pissing
     
  3. Super mad bump