The Battle of Liberty

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by CrimeFightingCactus, Sep 23, 2011.

  1. "Get up private!" Screamed Captain Michel. "It's time for training ladys!" exclaimed Captain Michel. All of the soldiers rise... Except for one. "What do you think your doing?!" yelled Captain Michel. "I'm sleeping dickhead, what are you doing?" Asked Private Snow. *Pulls out gun* "You see this smartass?" Captain Michel asked quietly. "Is it a gun?" Private Snow asked sarcastically. *Gun goes off* "Since we have that little problem solved." Captain Michel said. "Let's get training" said Captain Michel. *Soldiers all are training outside* "What do you think of these guys?" Captain Michel asked General Separd. "You have trained them well." General Separd complimented. "Yeah, Well they have got more to come..." Captain Michel says and trails off towards the end of the sentence.



    What do you think? It will get better
     
  2. I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  3. I didn't write all this for 1 comment
     
  4. i love the build up..Lets hear more of Sergeant Michels.
     
  5. Keep going 
     
  6. Pew pew pew 
    I like it!!!!!
     
  7. Is this thread like invisible?!?
     
  8. Cool keep up Lund 