full of life, empty with death

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by ShayleeBaby, Sep 18, 2011.

  1. Want to get a not out there that i am writing the beginning and it will be posted soon
     
  2. Rose walked down the pathway to get into the car she had been trying to flag down for hours with her thumb. She only had a little while before the sun would come up and she would hav to go down. As she began to get in the car she finally had a enough light from the moon and the dashboard lights to make out his features. He had a strong jaw line with round eyes that seemed black but i could tell they were some amazing color, his hair was black, his nose perfectly propotioned with his face, and he had the most radiant cheek bones, and his voice when he said......
     
  3. "get in", was just so smooth and seducing i just couldnt help but get right in that car without even asking a couple quuestions. We were driving for about 30 minutes before i finally asked where we were headed. He said, "Somewhere you will always remember", with the most sexy grin that showed his only, and may i add hottest flaw he had.. A dimple in his right cheek. He was unexplainable even to me and i have been around for centuries searching the world to find someone that i would risk my eternal life and soul for if they arent the one i need and am looking for....
     
  4. We kept on driving for about an hour until i finaly started to clear out my head a little and realise that the sun was coming up in 20 minutes and that we were in the middle of nowhere. Unlike most of the movies and stories that have been goin around this past centurie i cannot sleep underground because even though i am technicaly dead i still need to breathe so i can have oxygen mix with my blood so i can "live" and we dont sleep in coffins anymore; and the only reason we youst to sleep in them in the past was because houses werent built well enough so there would be cracks where sun could get through or the house could just collapse. We just sleep in a room with thick black curtains pulled closely together on every opening like the dorrs or windows. But there was no place like that out here and i doubt anywhere close to here so i would just have to....
     
  5. Um i dnt wana be a spoiled butthead but if noones reading this im not guna write anymore
     
  6. I'm reading
     
  7. I read this and ppl don't comment till it's finished