The Legion.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by __Jake__, Sep 19, 2011.

  1. 'Twas a fine frosted day, as the preator of the second legion, olympus class stood at the hill of the mountain, "IN FORMATION YOU PRATS!" their commander, Carlose, shouted.
    The legion stood in formation, shields ready, spears sharpened, the deadly tips aimed forward.
    "3,2,1 MARCH!" Carlose called, as his Legion walked forward, armour plates stiff with cold.
    "1st row! DROP SHEILDS, SECOND ROW, POINT SPEARS!"
    So they stood in formation, waiting for the barbarians to attack, Jake looked to his left, Andy stood there, he looked to the right, a girl named rogue,
     
  2. He smiled at her "Stay close to me."
    As they edged forwards the barbarians charged, "BREAK THE LINE!"
    Jake threw his javelin threw the first barbarian, and drew his shorts sword throwing his shield down, he ran at them, the first one he dropped down took down the guy and stabbed him in the back, then the next guy came up and uppercutted him and stabbed through the heart.
    "WE WILL SURVIVE!!!" Jake screamed
     
  3. "WE WILL SURVIVE! "
    Yeah.Yes we will
     
  4. Jake threw his sword threw a womans heart, killing her.
    Now he had no weapon.
    So he carged at the nearest barbarian, grabbing a shield and threw it at his head, knocking him cold, he grabbed his weapon, a longsword.
    Then he heard a shout and the barbarians began retreating.
    "TAKE YOUR PLUNDER!!!"
    Jake ran to the end of the battlefield, and opened a treasure box, there was over 1 million in gold there, he put it in his bag and began hunting for jewelry for his wife.
     


  5. "THIS IS SPARTA!!!!!!"

    Roflmfao. 
     
  6.  that's what I thought of too.

    SPPPAARRTTAAA!

    Oh hey look, my name is up there 
     
  7. I kinda addin everyone who is hardcore in it...
    Juu comes in as a fat alchaholic ;D
     
  8.  crazy ass
     
  9.  uh oh 
     
  10. Jake walked back to his house, armour on, shield slung over his back, sword sheathed.
    He noticed a smell of burning, which when he closed down the gap, turned out to be his house on fire.
    He was about torun when he saw the emperor walk out, he dropped to the ground.
    "Where is he?!" the emperor barked
    "I... i dunno sire" the praetor said.
    "Lets move quickly! Now!"
    "Sir he's... He's there!" the praetor was pointing it at him.
    "Take him down!" the emperor barked!
    Jake drew his sword, threw off his shield, dropped his loot sacks.
    This would be a fight to the very end.
     
  11. "NO!!! Hes mine!" the emperor screamed.
    The emperor threw down his cloak and drew his sword.
    "You should die!"
    "Lets do this, Sire" jake said coldly.
    With that the emperor charged at him and slashed his arm, Jake didnt even flinch.
    "Ow." jake said cryptically.
    Jake turned his sword into an arc, a deadly arc coursing right to the emperors head.
     
  12. Lol I'm not much of a reader but I'm here to support u! 