Questions, but no Answers

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by smileyface4eva, Sep 19, 2011.

  1. Ok so this is my second story. My first story was such a fail it got no readers. So this is my second attempt. Hope you like it.

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    Tears rolled down my face as I looked at the dead body in front of me. All I wanted to do was run to him and shake him till woke up. I knew this was a dream, but its a dream I'll never wake up from.

    All this happened because of me. If i hadn't have gotten so mad at him, I could be holding him in my arms.

    I just couldn't get through my head that he was gone, forever. Ever since that day I have blocked people out. I never let anyone make me happy, because I'm afraid of getting my heart broken. I just wish it would all go away and let me die.
     
  2. I don't really get it if UR in a dream or if it was real???but it was a pretty good start
     
  3. Thnx I'm not all that good yet. I'll try make it better in my next update.
     
  4. Oh and its real life shes just wants it to be a dream.
     
  5. Thank you guys! I'll write the next update A.S.A.P.
     
  6. TWO DAYS EARLIER

    I walked into my room and closed the door. I grabbed my phone off of my old wooden desk and called Matthew. Matthew and I had been together for 4yrs. We first met at my best friends birthday blow-out. Ever since I looked into those big brown eyes I knew he was the one.

    Matthew had dirty blonde hair and big brown eyes. He was also very tall and skinny. He had a tan to go with goodlooking body.

    But then one Tuesday I went to Matthew's house, greeted his parents, and went up to his room. When I opened the door I saw him and my worst enemy(I shall not name her) sitting on his freshly made bed, KISSING!! When I saw this I felt like I had been shot a million times in the heart. Matthew turned and looked at me. "Kate I can explain," he said nervously. "Yeah, I think you better!!" I shot back. "You what, its not even worth hearing." After I said that I ran out of his room and down the stairs. When I got to my car I just lost it. I started crying my eyes out. I was crying so much on the drive home I could barely see.

    When I got home I ran to my room and threw my backpack against the door. I laid down on my bed and cried myself to sleep. When I woke up I noticed I had a missed call. I looked to see who it was. It was Matthew. I listened to it:

    "Look Kate I feel really bad about yesterday. Please call me back. I want to talk this out."

    Since I was still mad at him so I didn't call him back. After school when I went home, Matthew was at my front door. I walked up to him and he apoligized for the hundredth time. I started yelling at him, and he left. Thats when my world turned upside-down.
     
  7. Haha so is it good??
     
  8. waiting...something I'm not good at
     
  9. Wat r u waiting for??
     
  10. Its 10 30 and i dont feel like writing ill write tomorrow.
     
  11. Ok, I'll be here...staring at the screen...wondering when another post will come. Lol, I'll be asleep
     
  12. Wait so u like it??
     
  13. Yes, yes I do .
     
  14. :3 it's awesome. I think I might die.