EmyLies

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Solange-, Sep 5, 2011.

  1. I, personally, think that a update would be a better reward
     
  2. Thanks! And well i'ts alright! Who wouldn't want a virtual puppy
     
  3. I fall on the wet grass, cold from the humidity of the night. I get back up and I charge again towards her, but as I got closer I look at her face and she looked in a trances. I keep charging and I tackle her down on the ground.

    "Their coming." She said then suddenly her arms wrapped around me and I look around me trying too find something to knock her out and let go of me. But I don't find anything, so I start struggling tryunf to break free, panting hard from the effort I look around again. Alix is looking right at me, locking her eyes in mines. I try too look away but something is not letting me. I start too not feel the girl's hand around me. I try too look what is happenning then, everything felt small I realise I was going up, up towards the sky.

    Something told inside of me to let free my powers. I thought i was going mad, but I still tried. Come on stupid powers! Work! I tried to do what spiderman did with his fingers, that didn't do anything. I tried to just
    flash my hand away from me lile iron man. That didn't help either. Eac passing minutes I kept going higher and higher. Relax Emylie. Just relax. I take a deep breath and slowly let it out. Still looking at Alix, I try and let my powers free. I felt something warm cover all around my body. I looked down and saw it was blue. I realized I broke free of his eyes. I look down and realize I'm still floating... I try to move back down on the solide ground but I end up closing in my powers and falling down from the hight of a tree to down the ground in 3 seconds.

    I try to get up when I see Altier, Alix, and the girl, that I still don't know her name, walk up towards me. I slowly get up painfully.

    "Like I said before you attacked us. We are not gonna do you any harm. I'm Altier. I can't die. That's my power. Some people think it's a curse other think it's a gift." Altier said, he has short jet black hair, brown eyes and his body is tone. He also looked about 6.5".

    "I'm Alix. But my real name is Alexis. I levitate just like I did too you." She looked kinda tom boy but a sweet heart, with aunburn hair tied up in a pony tail and her green eyes dazzling towards you.

    "Their coming closer. We have to go." The girl said. "That's," Altier pointed towards her. "is Katy. She goes in trances and she can watch around anywhere without moving. That's why she goes in trances." "Their getting closer and closer. Wait. Someone is watching us."

    I look around me and suddenly everything seems too stop for 5 seconds or so. "Julie. Get out of there. I know you're here. I told you too stay back." Altier said in a irritated tone. Something wiggles out from a bush and I see it's Julie. "Sorry Al I- I just wanted too help" She said in a small quiet voice, her eyes looking anywhere else but at Altier.

    "We've got visitors." Katy said and looked straight up towards behind us in the darkest part of the forest. The trees gave a dark glow because of the shadows and the moon.
     
  4. Continue please (sorry I'm so demanding it's just I like this story )
     
  5. I'm like the Oracle of Delphi shout-out to my mythology class, SILENT LLAMA!
     
  6. Also...This story friggin rocks!
     
  7. I'm re-reading it
     
  8. Am I good? How did you know I wanted to be appear bad but actually be good?!?!
     
  9. Lol cuse I read minds  And yes you're good!
     
  10. Camt wait for the hardcore action scenes and my characters intro
     
  11. You're already introduced and you'll also be in next update with few other people  It'll be the face off
     
  12. Awesome, you're physic!
     
  13. Poo I ment,
    Omigosh crazy intense-ness
     
  14. I know I saw my intro I meant for him to fight i wanna see some peopler get sliced-and-diced
     
  15. Hehe thanks guys!!Gonna update tomorrow!