Just an hour ago I announced to my family I was leaving home, to go to New York. They all looked at me in dis appointment. "Your a country girl" my father said. "Ain't no way a tiny girl like you can make it there" my brother Jared said. I shook my head, then left the house. I didn't even look back to say bye to my weeping mother and my demanding father. I knew there was a world out there bigger than Kansas. It was nearly dark before I reached the train station. People where boarding. Conductors' shout "ALL ABOARD"! Into the roaring crowd of people. When I went to step on to the train the conductor stop me. "Aye there little lady he said then tilt his hat.I nodded back then preceded to fine my seat. On the train babies where crying, business men where yelling about the latest gossip on politics. When I found my sit, there was a handsome young man sitting there."How are u?" I said. Is this seat taking? He nodded no then signaled me to sit down. The train engine yelled to life and woke me up. I didn't realize that I had fallen asleep. The train was silent besides the roar of train, zooming across the tracks. The sun was slowly rising and playing peek a boo over the mountain tops. Soon I will be in New York. A slight grin came to my face from the thought. "Good morning" the conductor whispered in my ear. I nearly jumped out my seat. "Good morning sir" I said politely. "Sorry to startle u young lady, would ya like a cup of tea or coffee?" said the conductor. "Coffee" I said pointing my finger towards it. He gave me a napkin and coffee and went to find another awake passenger. I looked at the man beside me. He was fast asleep. I couldn't help but want him to get off at New York too. I slowly drifted off back into a deep sleep. Chapter 2 Coming Soon
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Chapter 2 The conductor screamed "We are in New York"! I jumped to my feet clapping, only to notice I was the only one standing. I sat back down, feeling like a fool. The train came to a quick stop. Thats when everyone started getting there bags. The man beside me got his bags also. "Your going to New York too"I said. "Yes mam"he said then titled his hat. When I got off the train I didn't know where to go so I just walked and walked. The sun was setting and it was getting chilly. I was scared. I had know where to go and i had not a dime to my name. I found a spot in the alley and relaxed there for the night. I never knew what it felt like to be homeless until now. The morning sun shined brightly. The sounds of taxi horns and constant talking filled the air. I was exhausted but determined to make it somewhere. I stopped by a local coffee shop to just smell the coffee. A young lady around my age sat at my table. "Hello I'm Dana"she said. "Hello Dana, I'm Heather. Dana nodded then preceded to talk but stopped herself. Her eyes grew wide."What's wrong" I yelled. She started to cry and left the coffee shop. Everyone in the coffee shop stared at me. I was confused and shock. I wanted to know what was wrong!