One Shot

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Akimoto_Komachi (01), Aug 23, 2011.

  1. Sorry I'm feeling irritated I need to vent it all out.

    I drew my knife smiling.

    "No one escapes me. You are foolish to think that you might cheat me," I hissed angrily.

    There was a man that was all tied up and wimpering. He writhed on the floor trying to get away from me.

    "Such a pathetic sight!" I said smirking.

    I curt my hand first and dabbed it all over the floor.

    He look at me in confusion.

    I smile at him wickedly.

    "My dear stepfather. Surely you didn't think just now that you weren't going to get killed? That won't happen. I won't let you go! After what you have done I never will! You killed my mother!"I screamed at him

    I walked closer and knelt beside him smirking.

    "Now you are going to get killed." I hissed angrily.

    I brought the knife down and made a huge cut in his body. I smiled. Finally revenge. I had gotten it. I cleaned my knife on his clothings.

    I stared at it.

    Momma. I'm going to where you are. Until then don't get sick. Momma I love you.
    These were the last thoughts I had before I plunged the knife into my own body.

    im so wierdi never knew I could write storie like This
     
  2. ... :eek:



    RAGE N STUFF.





    Of course hun, rage is powerful... It gives you inspiration and power... Strong enough to make a Masterpiece.
     
  3. Veeerry good!! 
     
  4.  aki  nvr knew u could write like this  it's dark but good  well written
     
  5. MOMMY! Car car how the heck did you find this
     
  6. Mommy...?

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    Oh God I have to keel my alt. >_<
     


  7. Keeling iz a berry bad thing...

    Yeah I know..you would have read it properly if it wasn't rieten liycke dise
     
  8. Oh wow, the mood captured here is this really good!!