~First Generation Vampire War~

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  1. Sorry this chapter's so short and sorry it took so long. Enjoy!!

    ~First Generation Vampire War~(chapter 6: final part 2)

    *Danielle's pov*
    I sighed, this was extremely boring. All I did all day was sleep, he didn't even give you food. /at least there are bed.../I thought. I looked over at Rosy, who was just sitting there, starring at nothing. I've been in here for three days now. I still didn't know who captured me, and I was beginning to think that I was going to go crazy. I wasn't scared I was just bored. I had a hunter gun in my back pocket, so if that man came in...Bam! He'd be dead within an hour, vampire poison takes time but once they've been hit by it they're down for the count. The only cure is the vampire poison antidote. I sighed and laid back on the bed, for some odd reason I though it was night time. It probably was. The funny thing is, this room doesn't have any doors, or windows, just a mirror. I looked at the mirror, watching my reflection, until Sarah poked me in the nose. "what was that for?"I asked her. She shrugged. "you were spacing out"She told me, I nodded. "yea..."I said still staring. I felt like someone was on the other side of the mirror, but that's impossible. I sighed and flopped back onto my bed. "whatcha thinkin bout?"Rosy asked me. I sighed. "hey Rosy?" "yes?" "do you know anyone named Emit Olgeraz?"I asked my curiosity finally getting the better of me. She gasped. "that's my brother!! How did you know that?"she gasped. "your brother huh..."I mumbled. "well good night"I said and turned over on the bed.

    *Emit's Pov*
    I was sitting in my hideout with Shane, Seth, Alex, Tyler, Kailey, Jenny, and Sophie. We were all discussing plans on how to defeat Alic and his army. This was so frustrating. I heard pounding on the ceiling, then all of a sudden a small part of it caved in. A man with shaggy black hair, blue eyes, and tanned skin stood with a gun pointed at my head. /Danielle's Father.../I thought. "where's my daughter!!!!"he yelled venom hatred and poison dripping from his voice as he glared at me. "you have, three seconds to tell me where she is before I shoot!"he yelled again. "I thought Danielle was back in Florida?"I asked/said getting worried. I heard him click the safety back I gulped a bit. "no, the school closed down a year ago. I looked all over Florida!! She's not there!!"he yelled. "I'm going to ask you one more time, where is my daughter!!?"he yelled. I heard a thud, and smelt blood as Ferten's body fell to the floor, I looked up to see Seth holding a lead pipe. He shrugged. "what? I saved your life, so your welcome"he said. I sighed. /Danielle's missing...Alic's missing.../my eyes widened as realization hit me. I stood up. "Alic kidnapped Danielle!!"I told them, they all looked shocked. Everyone knew Danielle, and learned o love her as either a friend or a little sister. "wait what? Why would Alic do that?"Jenny asked. "because, he could A use her as a bargaining chip in the war, B turn her into a new born and have her as a slave and bargaining chip, or C drink her blood, use her at his party things, and use her as a human prostitute for vampires..."Seth answered for me, which each answer made me furious. "we need to find them, now"I commanded and they all nodded and spread out. I leaned against the wall. "dammit..."I mumbled. "if I were Alic, where would I think to go..."I thought out loud. "I'd leave America, and go somewhere really extravagant in Europe...but I'd stay away from the council...that leaves England, Greece, France, Italy, or Spain...Alic doesn't like the Spanish...so he's not there...Alic can't understand the accents in England...Italy is to Italian...Greece reminds him of cars and Alic hates driving...so that leaves France"

    *Alic's Pov*
    I smirked as I watched Rosy and Danielle sleep. /he...Emit will never find me.../I thought smirking. I looked at Danielle, the scent of her blood intoxicating. I almost ran in there and bit her, but I have a little more self control. I wasn't going to bite her, yet. Now Rosy, I had already bitten, more then three times a day, only to keep me from sucking Danielle blood. Though it didn't work out so well. /come and find your precious little girl Emit...she's waiting/I thought and began to laugh a sickly laugh and smirking. /They'll never find me in France...and even if they do, I have the one thing that's most precious to him.../
     
  2. Great job one of the best stories on fan fic
     
  3. Awesome job dani!
     
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  6. Yes please Danielle
     
  7. Hurry! I wanna see my character
     
  8. Bump write soon please
     
  9. Sorry it took so long I've just been so busy with school and my other stories so yea here's the next chapter~! Enjoy~! Ushishi~!
     
  10. ~First Generation Vampire War~(chapter 7: Final part 3)

    *Danielle's Pov*
    I was hugging Emit, he saved me from the man who captured me, he also saved Rosy but she was off somewhere. I leaned up to kiss him, but he bit me in the neck. It stung like a bitch. "ah!!"I cried out. He continued to drink my blood and backed me up against the wall. I felt light headed, and cold, as if he was going to drink me dry. When I looked down at him, it wasn't Emit, it was Alic. I tried as hard as I could to push him off, but he wouldn't let go. He had me in a death grip. I passed out, when I woke up I was covered in blood, and some other white substance. "yuck..."I mumbled and stood up, only to have my feet start to sink into the mushy ground. "agh!!"I cried and began to be sucked in. I reached my hand out for someone to take, but no one grabbed it. As I began to fall into black, my arms and legs trembled. I fell hard onto gray colored ground, I looked around seeing graves. I stood up and walked over to a grave that was glowing. It was my mothers, a rose suddenly appeared in my hand, so I laid it down on her grave stone. I felt something hard, and bone like grab my ankle. I gasped and looked down to see a skeleton's skull and boney hand wrapped around my ankle. The skeleton began to laugh and it's skull did a 360 degree rotation. I began to shake and scream. "come join mommy sweet heart. Come to hell with your mother"it said and laughed again. I began to cry. I couldn't pull my foot out and I was sucked in. I gasped and sat up right in my bed. Panting, sweating, and crying. That has been my nightmare that I've been having for the past three weeks. I sobbed quietly to myself. I heard something, and I looked over to my left side to see a boy. He had blonde-ish-brown hair and grey eyes. He wore all black and had ivory skin. I was scared. Though he seemed familiar, as if I've met him before. He walked over to me, and got on his knees, then wrapped his arms around my neck in an embrace. I was shocked at first. Then I relaxed into the hug. "are you alright?"his calm voice asked. I nodded. "do want water or anything?"he asked I shook my head no, he nodded and left. I blinked. What just happened? Ever since that night, two weeks ago(she's been gone a total of five weeks) he's been coming in and calming me down every time I have that nightmare. His name is James. I got used to him, and I actually am beginning to get more comfortable, though I still have that dream every night. He's a vampire, and he's been a vampire since Alic bit him three years ago. He said he's never smelt blood so amazing before in his life, but he said he can control his urge now. He's such a kind boy. I was sitting with my knees pulled up to my chest and watched my reflection in the mirror. /I wish Emit was here.../I thought. I missed Emit, I also wanted to be saved but still. I sighed and looked around. Why was I still here? "because there aren't any windows or doors, the only ones who can come in and out are Alic and his crew..."Rosy said. "how did you..."I was cut off by her. "know what you were thinking? Because all pureblood vampires have a special ability"she said. "mine is I'm able to read minds"she added. I nodded a little weirded out. "does this mean E-"again I was cut off by Rosy. "yes, Emit does have a special ability..."I nodded, again a little creeped out. I was still new to all this vampire crap, and hadn't really thought much about it. I sighed. This was going to take awhile.

    *Emit's pov*
    "we've looked everywhere Emit, and there's no sign of Alic, or Danielle. She could be dead already, and for all we know, he could've traded her and she's back home, safe and sound."Tyler told us. We all sat in our hotel room, in Paris France. I got to angry, I got up and slapped Tyler, glaring down at him. "don't you EVER talk like that to me!"I yelled. I grabbed him by the collar, yanking up up to my eye level. "we're not, giving up on finding Danielle. I don't care if it takes us an ETERNITY, I just want her safe. Is that understood?"I asked him, and he nodded vigorously in terror. "good"I said and threw him across the room. "your all dismissed, go find them, if you don't find them by sun rise, go back to your rooms and we'll search again tomorrow, because we're not stopping, until she's back here, safe, with me or her father. Now, go!"and as soon as the last words left my lips, they were gone. I looked at the shattered glass from throwing Tyler across a table, to the other side of the room. All the roses except for one, were dead, on the floor, crushed by shards of glass. The one that wasn't broken was left on the table, untouched by glass, but soaked in the water. I picked it up, only to draw my hand back and hold it with the other. I hissed as the blood began to rise to the tip of my finger, the red liquid staining my pale skin. My fangs grew, and I stuck my tongue out, tasting the sinful substance that only beasts could love, and lapped it away from my finger. Looking at the rose, the throne that had pricked me, has my blood dripping from it. "a rose, with extra thorns..."I mumbled.
     
  11. I love it! lol and u brought in another character with my name cool