Miracles

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Miss_Charlie (01), Aug 29, 2011.

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  2. Love the story!Yay, Carrie's in it!
     
  3. sorry everybody, not inspired right now. Plus school starts soon () so I need to get more sleep. Hopefully I can update tomorrow
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  4. Lol () get your beauty sleep darlin! I'll keep bumping,
     
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  6. Lavender looked down, only to se the carriage was gone. She gasped and looked over at Carrie, but she wasn't there either, even though she could feel her hand gripping her arm. She looked to outside the carriage. Hundreds of the royal guard marched towards to carriage, and passed right through it. Lavender screamed as hundreds of guards walked right through her, like she wasn't even there. She heard screeching behind her, like an enormous angry bird. She turned around to see a creature she had only heard of, a feeder. It rose twenty feet off the ground and was a deep emerald color. It's scarlet eyes gleamed in the moonlight. It raised it's scaly body on it's hind legs, and let out a great war. The three of us watched in terrified horror as the creature began to devour everyone in sight.
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    Kat stared up at the feeder. While everybody else ran around terrified she was furious, nobody mentioned THIS in guard prep. Quickly she ran through all she knew about feeders. They were rare beasts that were awake only during the night of the full moon. Extremely vicious. Bad eyesight... Ah Ha! Kat dove into the bushes, crouching down so nobody could see her, and silently laughed as the feeder ate all the guards in her unit.
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    Lavender sighed in relief as the creature walked away from it's gruesome feast. She heard the man (or woman, she wasn't quite sure at the moment,) muttering under their breath, and slowly the carriage materialized into view underneath her.
    She looked over, only to see a face that she had hoped to never see again.
    "You!"
    The woman looked at her.
    "What?"
    "You were the fortuneteller at the market!"
    "And your point is?"
    "Why did I live? Everybody else was dead."
    "That's a long story..."
    Lavender sat up.
    "Well I've got time..."
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    TBC...
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  7. Heehees! U a good author!!!!
     
  8. The next thirty minutes Julie-Su explained everything to Carrie and Lavender. The story of the last goddess, the great war, and the ancient prophecy. Lavender stared at her in shock.
    "So you're saying little Hope is the most powerful mortal on earth?"
    Julie-Su sighed.
    "I suppose you could say that, but right now we really need to get far away from here."
    Julie-Su hopped into the front of the carriage, while Carrie and Lavender sat in silence. What none of them realized was that a forth person had heard the entire story.
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    Kat stood next to the carriage listening to the fortunetellers story. She smiled to herself, spying was her specialty. Now, should she cling on the bottom of the carriage and follow the child, or should she go back to Chancifer and tell him all that she had heard. She smiled again, and took a smooth grey stone from her pocket.
    "Æł Çëż ßæœ."
    The stone glowed dimly as she stuck it under the carriage. She took out her compass to see where it pointed. Directly at the stone, perfect.
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    Chancifer got out of bed to feed Marrow. Michaela was still sound asleep. Marrow waited expectantly by the door. Chancifer lead him down the hall to the prison. Marrow knew what was next. He wagged his tail expectantly as Chancifer opened a prison chamber. Marrow ran in and he closed the door. The victims screaming echoed throughout the halls, but he paid it no attention. When the screaming stopped he opened the door. Marrow ran up to him with the mans still beating heart in his mouth. Chancifer smiled.
    "Good boy."
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    nite all
    updates when I'm no longer asleep
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    amazing story chap.
     
  10. Yes! Especially Julie-su
     
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    My gosh... I'm just a fortuneteller...
     
  12. lol mordici and pwnd im the bad person 2.  well... idk for sure but it seems like it
     
  13. Well, that's one way to train a dog. Great story!