"So what is your plan Aly?" Jake asked as they came back to the white gun room. "Somewhere out in this world, another family could be going through the same thing as I did. I can't let that happen, and you know that" Aly calmly said as she grabbed a few guns and slung them over her shoulder. "What are you going to do?" Jake asked as he looked up at Aly. She took a deep breath and began speaking. "I'm going after the people next in command of the assassin group of course... I'm not letting this happen anymore" Aly said as she loaded a few guns. "Well, I don't want to be apart of this. I don't want you to bring me into anymore drama" Jake said as he began turning the wheelchair around. "Then I guess you are my enemy..." Aly mumbled as she held a pistol in her hand. "I won't protect you. You do know that, right?" Aly asked as she stepped towards him. "The closest person to you is always your enemy Aly... I won't help you. You did this to me" Jake muttered as he began wheeling away. For some reason he became fed up with her, and wanted to never know her. "Goodbye Aly..." Jake mumbled as he moved closer to the door. "No... Goodbye Jake" Aly said as she shot the pistol at his head. He fell out of his chair immediately and fell to the ground, as blood poored out of his skull. She threw his chair to the side and walked over his dead body with many guns slung over her shoulder. The door immediately shut behind her and she quickly walked down the hall. "Like I said... This gift is my curse" Aly mumbled as she slammed the front door behind her. She took a deep breath of the Texan air and smiled and looked up at the sky. "Revenge is sweet..." Aly whispered as she smiled at the sky. "I'm finishing what our family started..." Aly calmly said as she began walking to her car. This was just the beginning.
I declare this story... FINISHED It was a pleasure writing this for you all, thank you all for all the critique and ideas you all gave me
This should of won Best Of.. Kinda sad that people don't know how to vote for an amazing story like this one.
Hey everyone... It's me; blondie (no duh). Well, I just wanted to fill y'all in on stuff, and yea, I just said y'all (major hickness showing today). Okay! Back on topic! I know I haven't been active in the last few days or however long, and it is for a reason. I'm just bored of PimD I guess and also being in sports, top of academics, and ATTEMPTING to have a social life is challenging. The only reason I came on here was because of my Fan Fiction, and I was really motivated by the whole "Best Of Fan Fics..." contest, so I was really trying hard to finish my story (which I did). As we all know I didn't win... But that's okay! It's just that it kinda motivated me, and now that pretty much my stories won't be well known, I'm kinda at that stage of ummm giving up? My day to day schedule is making me at school Monday- Friday for 13 hours (counting practice time for sports and organizations) My weekend schedule is just TRAVEL TRAVEL TRAVEL for sports/formal events. So honestly, I have no life haha. This place is my vacation kinda... You know, to get away from everyone I hate in the real world (even though there is people I dislike on here), but still I love coming here and writing. ALL my writing comes from me. It comes from my personal experiences, feelings I felt that day, or just my imagination running wild! Writing gets things off my chest, and I love sharing my feelings with people and enjoy it very much. So, I came here today for ideas for a new story possibly. I'm going to try to write a new one in my spare time (which is rare). I am asking YOU, the READER to tell me what YOU want. Do you want violence, drama, romance, death, life, sadness, comedy, pure joy, adventure or even a sequel to one of my stories! What do YOU want? Also, if you have any actual ideas for a story that I could possibly relate to myself or my feelings, SHARE IT! I really and honestly want to know. Tell me what you hate about my stories, tell me what you love about my stories... Tell me! Thanks for reading this everyone... And please, don't just write a few words. I honestly care what you all say and a few words will just waste my time... So please, tell me EVERYTHING. I love you all, and goodbye! Annnnd... Now this story will die down into the terrible second page zone, noooo! AGGGHHH! Save it!!! AGGHHH! Haha I'm a tad bit crazy at the moment... Alright byebye.