The Empty Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Akimoto_Komachi (01), Aug 22, 2011.

  1. Ik ur not hating. 
     
  2. Updating story
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    I stood outside the classroom door and bit my bottom lip lightly. I managed to swallow my fear and went in.

    I looked around me and saw Tiana. I smiled and sat on a chair next to her.

    "Tiana can't you trust me? Why must follow me every time?" I said smiling.

    "Asmina!!" she shrieked and hugged me.

    "I want to have a teenage life as well you know! I can't be a huntress forever," she said.

    I laughed and started drawing on my drawing pad. I froze staring at what I had drawn.

    I had drawn Master Lupin. I stared at it shocked and quickly erased it. Tiana saw what I had drawn and raised an eyebrow.

    "Looks like someone is missing Arania already," she said.

    "I do miss Arania," I said sighing.

    "Aw damn!" she said looking at the teacher.

    "What?" I asked.

    "Oh," I muttered

    "Stupid Hermes. He doesn't know how to add two digits together how is he going to teach Math?" Tiana hissed.

    "I don't know!" I hissed back.

    The Math lesson was the most boring lesson ever. All we ever did was do worksheets and copy down notes. I was about to pack up an leave when I heard someone yell,"Teacher, what about our homework?".

    "You get a free day because it's the first day of school," Hermes replied.

    "What the puck is homework?" I asked Tiana.


    "I dunno and don't say puck you should say f not p," replied Tiana.

    "And why must I do that?" I asked.

    "Because you must," she answered.

    "Yeah, that was such an awesome reply, not," I said sarcastically.

    "Here, you should take this book with you" she said ignoring my sarcasm.

    "I guess you're still motherlike," I said sighing.

    "Yeah and there's absolutely nothing wrong with that," she said back at me.

    I slung my bag over one shoulder and walked off without Tiana.

    "Hey, wait for me!"Tiana called out.

    She started running after me. Unluckily for her I had suddenly freezed on my tracks so she banged right in to me.

    Luckily we both managed to keep our balance.

    "Why did you freeze on your track?" Tiana asked.

    I didn't reply. I just stared at the place where a few seconds ago Sylvester had been...

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    Imma update later tonight
     
  3.  SUSPENSEEEE!
     
  4. This one is short but important
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    "Lets go!" said Tiana impatienly.

    I looked at the spot for one last time and followed Tiana with a thousaund questions exploding in my head.

    Tiana chatted to me the whole time we walked to the canteen. I mumbled yeah and continued to bury in my own thoughts.

    "Earth to Asmina!" Tiana said suddenly.

    "O.K. Be quiet. I'm trying to think," I said cross.

    Tiana sulked and stalked off to meet up with her friend Katie.

    I just kept walking wher my feet was leading me to, too deep into my own thoughts to even care where I was going.

    I suddenly banged into someone and fell to the ground.

    "Hey!" I heard a male voice.

    I looked up and froze. He looked like someone but I couldn't figure out who he looked like.

    "Oops, sorry," I said smiling.

    As I smiled I looked into his light green eyes. That was a big mistake. As soon as I looked into his eyes I fell down and down into the world of sleep.

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    ?????'s POV
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    Oh darn! I had forgotten to take off my protection charm.

    I caught Asmina as she fell down and raced to the nearest hospital.

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    to all my readers. Thanks for the support
     
  5. One question who's Sylvester ?

    Aki you must really know me well cause my character is just like me 
     
  6. I can't tell you it ruins the story
     
  7. OMG! WHATS HAPPENING?! Tell me!  lol Good work sis!  

    @Reanne Omg! long time no see!  (im zatty btw ) you might not remember me.

    P.s i updated 
     
  8. I saw and commented
     
  9. Ah I see so you're gonna explain later. Although could you like just introduce the other characters cause I'm a little confused now 

    Of course I remember you zatty.. I wouldn't forget anyone from K-wave 
     
  10.   i havent seen you around reanne!
     
  11. who should I explain?
     
  12. Because I only come on this game for the fan fics 
     
  13. do you write fanfics reanne?  I made one too  got inspired by aki to write one
     
  14. Uhhh Hermes and master lupin unless you're gonna explain them later too
     
  15. Nope too lazy and busy so I just read 
     
  16. i have to explain them later too
     
  17. Lol. I shouldnt tell who Sylvester is. 
     
  18. Don't u dare
     
  19. Lol, I don't wanna. 