Personal Reviews and Critism

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *CheekyChloe (01), Aug 30, 2011.

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  1. Yo guys!


    I've been thinking... How about make a thread for critism and reviews for stories? You can review others stories whether they are interesting, dull, or has millions of errors... Etc.


    You can also give critism as well!






    I have nothing else to say... 
     
    #1 *CheekyChloe (01), Aug 30, 2011
  2.  Oh! And that you just have to write the story title and author then write what you wanna tell to them!
     
    #2 *CheekyChloe (01), Aug 30, 2011
  3. The Nightmarish Woods
    By Me

    Extremely dull
     
    #3 *Akimoto_Komachi (01), Aug 30, 2011


  4. The point of this thread is so authors can review and critisize other people's stories. 
     
    #4 *CheekyChloe (01), Aug 30, 2011
  5. ...Are you?
    By CheekyChloe

    Extremely awesome!
     
    #5 *Akimoto_Komachi (01), Aug 30, 2011
  6. Red Luscious lips
    By CheekyChloe

    Awesome! I want moarbut I'll wait until ur in the mood to update and write
     
    #6 *Akimoto_Komachi (01), Aug 30, 2011
  7.  Idrt I'll ever write again. 
     
    #7 *CheekyChloe (01), Aug 30, 2011
  8. My damaged heart
    By IceGoddess

    Awesome! (Of course ur my sister)

    No criticism needed
     
    #8 *Akimoto_Komachi (01), Aug 30, 2011
  9. ever?

    U must not do that my friend Goldia.
    U have a talent and u must show that talent off to the world!
     
    #9 *Akimoto_Komachi (01), Aug 30, 2011
  10. You're one of us
    By blondie11

    Verrrry Good!
     
    #10 *Akimoto_Komachi (01), Aug 30, 2011
  11.  I'm too young to show that talent... Besides. My grammar still needs improvement.
     
    #11 *CheekyChloe (01), Aug 30, 2011
  12. no ur not. I swear ur better at writing then some of my friends
     
    #12 *Akimoto_Komachi (01), Aug 30, 2011
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    #13 *CheekyChloe (01), Aug 30, 2011
  14. Err and Goldia?

    Criticism is spelled this way
    C R I T I C I S M

    Not critism
     
    #14 *Akimoto_Komachi (01), Aug 30, 2011
  15. 



    See? S-C-H-O-O-L.
     
    #15 *CheekyChloe (01), Aug 30, 2011
  16.  my fingers type too fast lol
     
    #16 *CheekyChloe (01), Aug 30, 2011
  17. The empty story

    - akimoto kamachi.

    I think I got that right. 
     
    #17 *UltraViolet_ (01), Aug 30, 2011
  18. Kamachi?

    And No feedback
     
    #18 *Akimoto_Komachi (01), Aug 30, 2011
  19. Sorry.

    FAIL.
     
    #19 *UltraViolet_ (01), Aug 30, 2011
  20. Can someone tell me what they think of my story please?
     
    #20 *leeleecruz (01), Aug 31, 2011
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