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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Flowerangel, Jul 21, 2011.

  1. Thanks to all who bump this for me btw. And thanks for liking my story 
     
  2. Will update tomorrow loves 
     
  3. As hours passed, the sunset and I didn't even care. I didn't know what to do.
    Suddenly I heard a noise coming, I knew it was a human, I heard leaves getting kicked and sticks being stepped on and a guy yelling, "Kailyn!" I wasn't going to respond. I just stayed laying down crying, being ever so weak.
    "Kailyn!" I saw Hill rushing to me. "I've been looking everywhere for you babe! EVERYWHERE!"
    He picked me up and held me in his strong, buff arms. He smelt soo good, old spice, my favorite. He wiped away my tears and put his jacket around me as he carried me up hill to his truck.
    "What's the matter Kailyn?" He said holding me in the back of his truck.

    "I..I.." I started balling again and he just rocked me back and forth and hushed me until I calmed myself.
    "So Jeff.. Kissed me and I pushed away but then I just gave in, but I love you Hill."

    He just looked at me with shock. "Well what do you want Kailyn?"

    "I want you.. I think."

    "Babe, I will fight for you, that guy doesn't have respect for girls. He obviously just wants in your pants and you know I'm totally opposite of that. I've seen him trying to seduce girls, because he knows that the girls are attracted to him. He isn't the type to commit to someone like I can. I'm committed to you, Kailyn. I want you to be my wife one day, and I want to raise a family with you, and if you don't want this then you need to tell me."

    I smiled and grabbed his hand and kissed him hard. "I want you."

    He smiled at me, "that's good! Let's get you home huney. I told your parents you were staying the night at Delilah's so you wouldn't get in trouble for being out so late. You're welcome to stay with me tonight. I'll take you to my house and get you cleaned up and you can sleep with me tonight."

    I nodded,"Thanks sweetheart."
    He held my hand as we drove to his house.

    As we pulled into the driveway, there was someone sitting on his porch. When we got out of the car and got closer to this person, I could tell who it was and I knew it was going to be trouble.
     
  4. ཧསཧསིཅཇེཇས I want some moarrrzzz!!
     
  5. Will try updating soon 
     
  6. Who is it?!?!
     
  7.  this is good
     
  8. Will probably have a little update tonight.
     
  9. Jeff, who looked like he has had a few beers in the past few hours.

    "I kissed Kailyn today. I can tell it was the best time of her life" Jeff said with a big grin.

    "Oh really? She told me it was no big deal."

    "She's lying to make you not worry."

    "Kailyn was mine first."

    "Not for long bro."
    Hill just went up to him and gave him a bloody nose and I immediately ran up and pulled them away from eachother.

    "Break it up!!!" I yelled.

    "Sorry babe, I told you I'd fight for you." Hill said with a smirk on his face.

    "I'm going to drive Jeff home, he's not safe to do it himself." I said.

    "But.."

    "NO. I don't want him to get hurt. I'll be back. Love ya." I kissed Hill and then helped Jeff into his pickup truck as his nose dripped blood into a plastic bag. I drove Jeff home without asking for the address. I still remembered. The whole ride there he didn't speak once to me. Once we got to his house, I gave Jeff his keys and called Hill to come pick me up.
    Before Jeff went inside he gave me a hug and kissed my cheek.

    "I'm so sorry baby, it's just that.. I'm not usually into a girl that easily. I really want you Kailyn. You're so attracting to me."
    I just rolled my eyes,"Well, it's not okay, but whatever I guess. Just so you know though, I'm not leaving Hill. You're not even the committed type and not even my type. All the girls want you.. Because they see you as a hot bad boy. Hill, he's special.. A hot smart guy yet he's the sweetest and most loving guy I've ever met. He's not the type to dump."

    He nodded,"We will see." he walked into his house as he saw Hill coming down the road.
     
  10. Sorry if this may not make much sense.. I was distracted when I wrote this update 