Zoey walked down the hallway with her gun raised. Kids were hiding in classrooms in fear of the intruders; and she was loving every second of this. She slowly looked down and saw Anastasia on the ground, dead to a head wound. "Tsk tsk... The girl could never think," Zoey mumbled as she began walking down the empty hallways once again. She was quickly dragged into a dark closet by a man and she held the gun to his strong chest. "Baby... You gotta watch out. You never know when a bullet will go in your face!" Zoey yelled as the man pushed her against the wall and kissed her intensely. "Cody..." Zoey said between the kisses, "we gotta get back to work baby. Our job isn't done." Cody quickly broke the kiss and smiled wide. "Baby, after this job, I'm taking you places! We're going to travel the world Zoey. And we're going to move to the top of everyone!" Cody whispered as he gabbed her tightly. "We will rule this entire world!" he whispered as he pushed against her body. "It's a pity we have to kill Aly... She could have been one of us" Zoey whispered as she moved against his body. "Mmmm... Maybe it's not too late for her to be one of us" Cody mumbled as he opened the door silently. He and Zoey quickly walked out and he slapped her butt. "Get back to work. I'll find Aly, and you take out the others alright?" Cody demanded as he sprinted down the hallway.
Jake, Aly, and Zane soon split up and began looking for the others. Aly didn't have a clue where Calum was, and she personally didn't care. She slowly saw two of her classmates; a boy and a girl, come strolling down the hall and they quickly pulled out knives. Aly slowly raised her gun and quickly spoke, "Look... Just drop all this shit and walk away. I'm not in the damn mood for this." The boy and girl quickly glanced at each other and smirked. "Let's see how fast you are with knives bitch!" the boy yelled as he swiped the knife for Aly's face. Aly quickly grabbed his arm and kicked it and she heard the snap of the bone shattering. The boy quickly screamed in pain and fell to the ground. The girl quickly ran for Aly and tackled her to the ground. Aly quickly punched the girl hard in the face and flipped her over. The boy quickly stood up and grabbed his fallen knife and stumbled to Aly. She quickly kicked him down and grabbed his knife out of his hands. The girl bolted straight up and lunged for Aly, but the girl was too slow. Aly quickly stabbed her in the chest and watched the life go out of her eyes. Aly quickly took a deep breath and twisted the girl around and the boy classmate lunged for her. He accidently stabbed the dead girl, and Aly quickly pushed the girl on top of him. The young boy quickly yelled in fear of seeing his friend dead and Aly quickly stood up and kicked him in the head, knocking him out. She slowly walked to her fallen gun and quickly threw it down the hall after noticing it was empty. "Fuck this..." Aly mumbled as she walked down the empty hall with the only weapon she had; a knife. At this point, she didn't care about anything. No regrets, no pain, nothing. All she felt was getting away from all this, and running away with Zane and the others. Running away like they always do...
Charlie quickly ran through the halls, helping anyone in any way possible. He had successfully told almost every class to baricade the rooms, and now kids were trying to get ways put of the school besides the main doors (which were loaded with armed men who had no fear in killing kids). Charlie quickly rounded a corner and saw Jake stabbing two people to death. He quickly ran over to him and pulled Jake off of the two boys. "Dude, they're dead. Save energy for any others!" Charlie yelled as he pushed Jake away. Tears formed in Jake's eyes and he quickly wiped his eyes. "I'm a killer Charlie! Even if I get out of this, none of this crap will stop. They'll go after everyone I love and care about, until no one is left! There's no way out!" Jake yelled as he quickly stood up. Charlie quickly grabbed him by the shirt. "I suggest you stay a little quieter because there is probably many more hitmen roaming this damn school. If you want to live for more than five more damn minutes, I suggest you shut up..." Charlie angrily muttered as he calmly let go of Jake's shirt. Jake quickly turned red and began walking away. "Where the hell are you going?" Charlie asked quickly. "I'm done with all this shit! I'm done! I'd rather die than all this crap happening! Do yourself a damn favor and leave me alone, and just go die Charlie! I'm done with YOU and all of you damn people who brought me into this!" Jake screamed as he began jogging away. "You brought yourself into all this!!!" Charlie yelled as he clenched his fists.
The story line is great! But perhaps you can cut down on your use of the word 'quickly'. It makes the story seem bland.. Good job on the story!
Yes Tanya, thank you! I agree so much about that, and I kills me on the inside every time I write that word haha! Trust me, I try to think of other words, but with it being summer... My mind won't work
Charlie stumbled down the hallway as he heard men following him. He was attempting to get the bathroom Gabby was hiding in. A man suddenly popped up at the end of the hallway with his pistol raised. Charlie slowly took a deep breath and gasped. "Cody?!" Charlie yelled as he pointed at him. "Don't act like you are so schocked you idiot..." Cody calmly mumbled as he moved closer to Charlie. He immediately turned the gun to the side and looked at Charlie. "Well... Charlie, do you want to be one of us or would you rather go the other way?" Cody asked as he glared at Charlie, already knowing what he was going to choose. "What the hell is all this damn 'you're one of us' crap?! Look asshole, you aren't cool for being in some gang that tortures people. I'm done with all your crap. Just do your buisness and leave. I've lived my life..." Charlie whispered as he glanced at the restroom right next to him. Cody sighed slowly and lowered the gun, and shot. Charlie yelled loudly and fell to the ground, in agonizing pain. Cody stood over him and smirked widely. "I'd rather leave you being tortured and pained to death than to just shoot you in the face..." Cody whispered as he smiled and walked away down the hall. Charlie grabbed at his bleeding stomach and threw up blood. He began slowly crawling to the restroom as blood left a long trail over the floor.