my weird made up song

Ok but as lindsey said could use some changes.

 

You're the next Rebecca Black. I'll be waiting for your best track.

 

That's a good start.. Lol I should post my raps 

 

She's famous though so be careful what you wish for!
Hahaha.
It's FRIDAY!

 

Friday.

 

Party it, party it, (yeah)
Party it, party it (yeah)
Fun, fun, fun, fun
Lookin' forward to the weekend

 

Rofl.
It's partyin', partyin'!
You played along, so it's okay.
Hahaha.

 

Cut the part from Super Bass.
Your lyrics are a bit... Mmh.
I dunno... I don't like being a critic cause I'm harsh.

Instead why not write a mash up of Super Bass and another song?

Cause to be honest "my heart beat running away," part is the only part of the song I really like.

 

Isn't the 'heart beat running away' part from a different song?

 

Yes, it's from Super Bass by Nicki Minaj.
That's why I said to just do a mash up.

 

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