Controlling Me... 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *LexiTheSexi (01), Aug 27, 2011.

  1. Her eyes were like a innocent blue mist but they were Controlling me. I did nothing for my love for her was strong but a fatal tear rolled across her Smooth skin.

    "Dana.. What's wrong my dear?"

    His voice was like a silent whisper in the black room.

    "Josh ... It's complicated"

    Her Blue eyes were full and couldnt take it so she burst out in Tears.

    "If it is more complicated then how I crave your love then I must know"

    He was determined to find out what happened to his love.

    "I have Done something wrong and you will not forgive me when I speak of it to you my dear Josh!"

    "Still! Do tell me, nothing may stand between our Love!"

    "I've been controlling you but now I know my love is true! I cannot stop myself from doing it!"

    "Control me as you wish I will be your love no matter what!"

    She didnt know what to do know...
     
  2.  great writing!! I want more! :p
     
  3. She didn't have time to think. Josh saw how worried she was so he slowly kissed her.

    "Josh..I'm tired, so I'll see you tomorrow dear"

    "Okay well Bye then Dana honey"

    She watched him leave from her window and sobbed. She thought of something but it wouldn't work.

    She went to a school full of Vampire, Bat and Zombie Clans. But she was one of a kind, she was an angel of darkness. She lived with her friend Heidi, who was a Zombie. Heidi only knew she was an angel of darkness.

    She was thinking of taking Heidi to the darkness side but zombies werent aloud. So she was planning to take Josh so he would creep in as a Bat. After He saw what she was like he would stop liking her.

    ________
    If anyone gets to close to an angel of darkness they get controlled.
     
  4. What wrong ? why the OMG!
     
  5. Oh! Thanks! It just came to me!
     
  6. Wha??? (says in french tone)
    Impossible!
     
  7. No I am ze verie seriousa! (Says it in French accent)
     
  8. wasn't expecting that! :O still good :3
     
  9. It's really good especially the part about zombehs