the west tower

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Mrcooool (01), Aug 25, 2011.

  1. Ok, fine. 

    Two thumbs and 9 stars
     
  2. I give u  5 thumbs and
     5 stars
    I love it!
     
  3. Hey Ken good story!!
     
  4. I walked to the edge of the clearing where the man had been standing. Well there wasn't anything interesting there so I went into the woods. I walked and walked and walked where the hell was this guy. I heard a movement behind me and turned to see a girl with long brown curly hair. "impressive" she said "what?" I asked. "the fact that you shot him in the face""you should see some of the stuff I do at practice" we talked for a while and it turned out she was 16 (2years older than me) and she lived in the nearby village. "Do you want to come see the castle?" I asked "sure" she said and we walked back. When we came to the clearing she pointed at the man's body and said"that's legend" "ok" I said. We walked back to the castle and I took her to training with me. Once Ben (my crossbow teacher was done yelling at me for being late he asked her if she'd like to shoot a target. "sure" she replied and he gave her my crossbow. She aimed at the target and fired. It missed completely and hit the east tower. she handed it to me and I shot the target in the center and smiled at her. "Showoff" she said and gave my friendly push. She took the bow and shot it up in the air I followed it with my eyes and knocked down the target. It hit the target on the very edge. "YES!" she shouted and did a little victory dance. Ben was getting annoyed at us "stop messing around!" he told me "fine I said and asked him what I had to do next. "shoot that bird" he said and pointed to a bird. My first shot missed and hit the ground, my secant shot hit the poor little bird in the head and it fell to my feet.
     
  5. u killed a bird!;(good other than that
     
  6. He just shot the bird three times
     
  7. Poor bird it nvr stood a chance now u haveta eat it!!!!!!
     
  8.  yummy
     
  9. So no more shooting birds?I'll shoot dear
     
  10. x 100,000,000
    and
    x 500,000,000
    I love it!! Its really good!
     
  11. Eat boar!!
     
  12. Ben told me to skin the bird. Ugh it was bloody. Once I finished he made a fire and told me to roast the bird. I did as he said. Once I was done he said "eat it"I took a bite and shuddered at the taste. "you had better get used to it he said. "why?" I asked "because you will be living in the woods for a week."he said. "well what are you doing just sitting there? Go!" o ran to the woods and heard someone behind me. I turned to see the girl. "your coming?" I asked "yup" she said. "well if we are going to be in the woods for a week we'd better get to know each other." okay I'm ken and I'm living at the castle to train to be an assassin. My parents died when I was little and my sitter died with them."I said. "I'm sorry to hear that" she said. "oh I got over it."it I replied. "how did they die?" she asked. "that's the part I haven't gotten over. The were killed by a man. I don't know his name but he tortured them to death."I replied "you never told me your name so I'm going to call you John" I said "hello John" "my name is grace" said John. "okay grace" I said
     
  13. Ha hi John!!!!
     
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