Stories (leave your opinion please!) <3

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *LittleMiss_Bambi (01), Aug 20, 2011.

  1. drema
    red hair, blue eyes
    never listens to anybody, jumps to conclusions quickly, normally nice but has a mean streak
     
  2. The Dragoness continued..

    Before I could continue to think about anything else I was interrupted. "Koi! Aren't you excited?" asked one of my best friends, Sythia. She looked like she was going to pee her pants. I obviously didn't need to ask her if she was excited or nervous. "Yeah," I replied.

    Ember, my other best friend, skipped over looking confused. Sythia stopped her "I'm about to pee my pants" dance. Uh-oh. She frowned. Double uh-oh. Sythia rolled her eyes and sighed, "Well act like it then Little Miss." Ember didn't look confused anymore she smiled,"So Koi, not excited or nervous like everyone else?"
    "Okay. I'm nervous and not that excited." I said.
    "It's okay that's one reason we are all are such good friends we are weird.." stated Sythia. She looked like she was giving some important speech.
    "Not weird. Unique or special!" corrected Ember.
    "Okay. Well Sythia, you are excited. I saw your dance moves." I winked at her. Sythia is simply fun to joke around with.
    She answered my obviously not a question, "That is not an excited 'pee my pants' dance. It was a 'I really got to pee' dance.."
    Ember and I gave her a doubtful look.
    She admitted, "Okay I'm a little excited."
     
  3. Cool and either Cyri or Cayenne
     
  4. You're really good keep at it :) I do stories too but they're not as great as yours!
     
  5. I hope you don't mind if I your characters name is Ember? If you really want a different name I will change it.:)

    Thank you so much! I'd love to read your stories!
     
  6. If you were talking tome about the ember name, then sure, idc!!!
     
  7. This is a good story!!! A little character description would be nice, but other than that, keep going the way you are. 
     
  8. Yea I'm fine as long as the rest of my girl isn't changed to drastically! Unless you wanna make her pale with like dark red long hair, I'll be cool with that
     
  9. Thank you and I will describe what they look like soon:)
     
  10. Cool! Can't wait for the update!
     
  11. I start school tomorrow but I should be able to update tomorrow!:)
     
  12. I will try to update tomorrow!:)
     
  13. I really wanted to update but, my teachers are.... Yeah. they all gave me about three pages of homework...
     
  14. awwwwww homework stinks!!'
     
  15. wat is forums for????

    Ummmm wat is all this???????
     
  16. What do you mean what is all this?
     
  17. I'm sorry no update! School has been stressful and stuff /: hopefully I can tomorrow. :)