"noooooooo"I yelled as my sister blew me up in halo reach."this game is so hard I said to my 14year old sister.Me and her were exact opposites she was 100 pound heavier than me and she played nothing but halo.Me I was 16 and I had the perfect life.I played football and was super strong I was the quarter back.Just because we were different didn't mean I didn't like her.She was the only family I had.my parents were killed when we were 3,1 year later we were adopted by the McPattersons.They are very nice and I love them.today was my sisters birthday and we had planned a surprise party for her.Her whole class was coming.So where was I? Oh yeah halo she powned me. No big surprise. I heard a knock on the door and ran to get it. It was her class I told them to sneak in thrue the back door. "Hey Jennifer" I called to her "will you go get my sweatshirt from the hanger". When she left I ran to the back door and let her class in. "Hide" I whispered to them. Jennifer walked in with my coat and called Jake come out"I signaled her call and counted (3) (2) (1) (0) SURPRISE
All Jennifer's classmates turned to me when they yelled surprise they started to melt like candle wax. Then they started to reform into exact replicas of Jennifer! I grabbed my sister and sprinted as fast as I can which is much faster then Jennifer can run. She tripped on a log and let go of my hand she was swarmed by her "twins" and the last thing I herd was a scream of agony. I woke up in a dark room tied to a chair. There was some type of sticky stuff on the floor and it slid up my body until it covered me (eww). I couldn't move at all then the stuff slowly melted away onto the floor again. It reformed in the shape of my body and it laughed a laugh that sounded just like mine.
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