Hey this is my first time writing so it's probably gonna be awful but yeah! Tears fell down my face and made my shirt wet. I continued to cry silently. I stared at the book of my life. The book that had ruined my life. The book that had nearly killed me. I pulled my long hair back in to a ponytail. I stood up staring at my bag that stood near the door. I felt a sudden rage surge through me. I suddenly grabbed it and threw it across the wall. I listened for the dull thud of the bag hitting the wall. I heard nothing. I saw a young teenage boy holding the bag. I gasped as I realized who it was. ------------------------------------------------ Is it ok? or ?
With every step I took toward that teenage boy I felt unbearable pain. But I kept walking. I wanted to see for myself whether he had truly come back. To my world. To my life. I walked tiny little footsteps toward him and removed the cap he had been wearing. He was back. My master, Sandano. I gasped once more and knelt down before him. "Master!" ------------------------------------------------Sorry it was short I'll write longer next time!
I'm not exactly sure anyone likes it I'll updated tmrw and if no one comment I won't do. Don't want to waste forum space.
Don't say ur wasting forum space!! This is a great story and everyone's stories should be heard in the forum, it is a good thing tht we have so many great writers!
"My lord!" I whispered in joy. "Asmina Marie Xanthippi, I am no longer your lord nor your master have you forgotten that fact already?" he said half amused and bemused. "I am sorry my lord," I didn't dare raise my head "There you go again 'my lording'." He gave a soft chuckle. "Asmina. You are free to live a normal teenager's life now. You do not need to risk your life for Arania again," he whispered softly I laughed and was about to act hurt that he was joking about something as serious as that. I saw the look on his eyes. He was serious. He was finally granting the wish I had wanted a long time ago. "My lord?" I asked with wonder "Asmina I hope you will do well in your teenager life. I have bought you a gift that will help you with it. Mr Lankade said it was useful. It's something called a homo..home..homewar...Oh right it's a Homework Solver," he said "Knowing Mr Lankade I probably won't have to do anything while that strange thing called Homework Solver does eveything," I spoke with a light chuckle. He placed the gift on my table along with my bag he had been holding. He turned to me. He smiled and disappeared into thin air. I sat on my table (yup I said TABLE) thinking about different things. I had finally gotten what I had wished for a long time. But why? Why was I feeling so empty and hollow? Why? Why? WHY? ---------------------------------------------- The next part is going to be better. I wish I had a homework solver.
My eye caught a bracelet lying on a corner of the room. I got off the desk I had been sitting on and walked over to the corner wondering what it is. There was a note with the bracelet. It read: Asmina. Be safe. The bracelet has a protection charm in case Dankau finds out your location and tries to harm you. When your ready to go to your teenage life press the button next to the letter. Sure enought there was a small blue button next to the letter. I looked around my tiny and shabby but cosy room. I got a small black bag and shoved my I-pod and phone and all my valuables. I spotted the book I had been raging over before Master had come. I glared at it. I was still angry at the book. I was still blaming the book for everything even though it had had no fault. I sighed before grabbing it and setting it to flames within seconds. I threw the ashes outside the window. I watched it get blown away by the wind. I then slung my little bag over my shoulder, put on the braclet. fetched the gift Mr Lankade and pressed the button. Silence fell. The seconds felt like hours. I was beginning to wonder it I hadn't pressed it properly. I reached out to press it when the room started shaking. It shakes so much that I couldn't keep my balance and feel over banging my head. After around five minutes I opened my eyes to a whole new place. I sat up rubbing my head. I looked around my surroundings. There was a neat little bookshelf filled with all kings of books and a jewelery box on top of the bookshelf. There was a cute little table with manga drawings. There was a small sofa with loads of cushions and the bed I had landed on was beautiful. I wouldn't be able to explain how beautiful it was! Just then someone knocked on the door and opened it. I stared at the person. She had lovely long black hair with light brown eyes. She was smiling at me. I was taken aback. The last time I had seen someone smile at me was when I was around 5. "Hello Asmina! Can I call you Min? I'm your mother from now on. I don't want any of that stepmother or guradian stuff. I am your mother and you are my child! You probably don't know mr and your thinking 'What the heck is she saying and where the hell am I?' Well I brought you from that awful orphange. Aren't you glad? Well then I'll leave you alone to organize your thought a bit!" and with that she smiled and closed the door. I stared at her taken aback. I had three words in my mind. What....The......Hell? ---------------------------------------------- I'm so lonely If 3 people comment I continue