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Ya, all in all, it sucks

 

Awful. Just awful.


Punctuation? Absent.
Grammar? Absent.
Detail? Absent.
Plot line or anything to make it interesting? Absent. :roll: -

 

JESS?!?! UR ACTIVE?!??!? OMG OMG OMG OMG EEEEEKKK!!!!!!







I MISS YOU SO MUCH AND MICKAYLA'S IPOD BROKE!!!!!!

 

bump

 

I thought it was pretty good

 

Ok, a little harsh maybe? Though constructive criticism is needed.

 

Okay I agree it's a little sloppy but it's a fine story it just need a touch up on the grammar and some people who won't go over board with the
"criticism"

 

Haha wow

 

Slice is right youu guys need to cool it it's her first time rightin give her a break I thout it was goodkeep goin