a different love story 

Okay so this is my first story ever. Please comment and give me honest opinion. Thanks!!

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" He doesnt love you" he whispered.

" Yes, he does" i said, crying. " you dont know him, he'll come back for me. I know it"

" I wish you would just be with me" he said, with sad eyes.

" Juan, we've talked about this. I dont love you that way" i whispered the last few words.

" Ale..." he lift my chin up to face him. His eyes were watery and i felt the pain he felt. The pain of loving someone who didnt love you back. " i'm in love with you".
Juan was my bestfriend. He knew all my secrets And i loved him. I did. Just not enough to change anything.

" He'll be back. He has to" i said, wiping the tears away. I knew Daniel would be back. He had left me without saying anything. But we were far in love for him to just leave me. I had been crying the whole day because he had left.
Daniel hadnt showed up to school, or gone to my house afterschool. So i drove to his house, and found no one there. No one. The house was empty as if no one had ever lived there.
" my heart beats for him, and only him" i said. I got up from the bench we had been sitting on, and started wAlking towards his car. Juan followed me and quickly opened the door for me and waited until i got inside. I was quiet the whole ride home.
" I always thought there was something odd about Daniel. He seemed, i dont know," he said uncomfortably, biting a lip. "a bit too perfect to be true. Ale i can make you happy, without hurting you". At that point he had pulled on my driveway and parcked there.

" I know," i said and got off, went inside and closed the door behind me.
Daniel was glorious. He was like a dream. His brown curly hair was perfect. His big perfect lips were addicting. Daniel had something no one else had. He had a magnet that pulled me towards him. We were meant to be, i knew it.
We had been going out for three months and now he was gone. Gone. And then i began crying again. I cried so hard my heart ached. My knees trembled and my lip quivered. I finally fell on the floor, crying and i began wishing i were dead...

 

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Six weeks had passed by since he left me. Six weeks i had been crying every night. I had been quiet at school, i wasnt tAlking to anyone. It felt so out of place for me to pretend eveything was normal when i knew it wasnt. Ever since he left i tried calling several times but it would just go to voicemail. It wasnt until three weeks ago that i called and his phone was off. Shut down.
I cried. Cried all day. Daniel had loved me , i knew it. He had to have a good reason for leaving me. Daniel promised never leaving me, and i believed him. Because i knew him well.

I was in my room lAying on my bed, working on my french homework. " Je suis trés belle " i said out loud, but quickly decided that that was not true. I was not beautiful because if i were, Daniel would not have abandon me. Daniel... I quickly began jotting things down in my notebook to get my mind off of him, but it was too late, my mind was already flashing back to the moment when we first met.....
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I was sitting in my French class as usual, when my french teacher, Madame Dorsey, said there would be a new kid coming in fifteen minutes and that we should all be polite and friendly. At first i was annoyed because i disliked the newbies, but then when HE walked in my mood shifted. And my whole attention drifted to him. Daniel was godlike, he had a glow around him. Daniel's brown eyes changed from brown to gray, then violet and then back to brown. I gasped because i had never seen someone so perfect. He was flawless, he was something else. Daniel was inhumanly perfect. And i loved him.
" Guys, this is Daniel" announced Madame Dorsey. " Well tell them something about you Daniel," She said.
Daniel looked at us one by one, all the girls waved at him and winked. Daniel's eyes rested on me and i stared back at him. His eyes widened and then narrowed, and then he gave me a dirty look. I quickly looked down and hoped no one had seen that. I was embarrassed and intimidated all at the same time. I didnt know him. Why would he give me a dirty look? I decided i would hate this guy for ever.

"My name is Daniel Wiggins" he paused and smiled " i am seventeen and this is my sixth year in a french class". And with that he took a seat right behind me.

After that, Daniel tried hard to stay away from me. He always hung out with all the girls that were crazy about him. I would see him in the hallways with a different girl all the time. Sometimes he would smile at me and wave, but other times he would give me a dirty look and ignore me when i passed by. I didnt know why he would do this, he didnt even know my name. Okay, well maybe he knew my french name, Caroline, but not my real name. He had never taken the time to tAlk to me. But then again, why would he? I was nothing special. I was a simple girl, brown eyes, brown hair. That was it, there was nothing to me. I was a hispanic walking among the whites of my school. Why would Daniel talk to me? And with that thought in my head i decided that i would completly ignore him, as if he didnt exist.
It wasnt until few weeks later thAt he started talking to me.

I was sitting in french class finishing up some excercises that we had been assigned when he turned to me.
" Hey, uhm do you need some help?" i remember him asking.

" No, thanks" i said.

" Well you seem like you do and, uhmm i know the language pretty well," he insisted.

" I said no, thanks" i said rudely, because i knew he was just playing games like he had been doing since the begginning.

" Well okay," he said.

After that day he just kept trying to talk to me. Like if i needed help opening my locker, or carrying my books, or if i had enough money for lunch. It wasnt until he asked if i needed a ride home that i asked him what he wanted from me.

" What do you mean what do i want from you?" he had asked.

" I mean you keep trying to talk me and you dont even know me. You dont even know my name".

" Your name is Alejandra Madrid. And well i want to get to know you. You seem worth the shot" he explained.
I was dumbfounded because i hadnt known he knew my name. After that i accepted the ride home and ever since he gave me a ride home every day afterschool.
We would go on dates and kiss. But it wasnt until one night that he asked me to be his girlfriend. We had came from the beach and he gave me a kiss as i was saying goodbye. Just when i was about to open the door of the car to go inside my house he grabbed my arm and said that he liked me, alot.

" I like you too Daniel," i said and gave him a light kiss on the lips.

" No i mean i really like you. I want you to be mine ,Ale" he said.
We had been perfect for eAch other, we were meant to be. Every time we kissed, sparks fly. Girls were jealous and guys were mad. We had a perfect relationship, until now.

 

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Next morning, i decided to skip school and stay home instead to do laundry. I was really behind on everything and since i lived alone everything was a mess. I decided to call Juan so he can come over and he said he'd be over in a little bit.
Juan was twenty three and he didnt go to school with me. He was my friend for so long that i cant even remember. We were really close to each other and since i felt lonely i wanted him to come over. When the door bell rang i was putting some rice to cook. I quickly opened the door And invited him inside.
" Hey what's up?" he saluted me.

" Nothing, here cooking. I hope you're hungry" i said.

" WoAh you haven't cooked in a very long time. I see you are feeling better," he said.

" No," was all i said. Because i wasnt feeling any better than when Daniel left me. I was alone and without him, this world wasnt mine. It all felt like a long lost dream and that made me feel even more isolated. The thought of Daniel coming back is what made me live everyday. The memories of him is what made me breathe, and go on with this. I felt like a big hole had been punched through my chest. Daniel, why did you go?

" Ale, i know how much you are suffering, and well i told you that you have me if anything. I will always be here for you because i love you more than you can imagine," he said.

" Thank you. I love you too," i said And hugged him tighly. I felt a tear slipping away and i quickly wipped it off.

" Here," he said " i'll help you cook".

Every day dragged on and on. It was as if time wouldnt pass by. But it did. It had been four months since Daniel left me and still no word. I found out through Juan who found out through Charlie that DAniel's older brother, Patch, was living in Colombia. Patch was never one i liked , but if he was in Colombia that meant that Daniel had to be there too! Juan had convinced me thAt Charlie was sure that Daniel wasnt there. Charlie Reid was an old ex girlfriend Patch had. That night i cried, cried because i really had no idea where Daniel had gone.

 

Me and Juan were getting closer, and i liked it. We spent more time together and told each other more stuff than ever. One night he even stood with me in my apartment.
I had been crying that night as well and i had asked him to stay with me.
" Juan, stay with me. Dont leave me. Not you," i said through tears.

" I will never leave you," he assured me.
And i fell asleep in his arms...

 

U'll see !
And thanks for readig !

 

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