the brightest day, darkest nights

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *leeleecruz (01), Aug 7, 2011.

  1. Dedicated to Imyourchick
    -thanks for giving me the idea

    --prologue--
    I guess I always knew. Knew that he was dangerous. That he was using me. There was this one part of me that always on edge. But, whenever it would speak up, it was drowned by all the love I felt for him. I even think at one point, he might have loved me too, but that part faded. Faded by the darkest parts of him that he wouldn't show me but always made sure I knew. Knew that a part of him was crazy. A part of him wanted to love me but couldn't. And that all of him fought against everything he has ever learned. I watched as he hesitated over which knife he would cut me with first. I looked at him with love in my eyes and hate in every tear I shed. He then turned to me, his piercing blue eyes staring into mine."I'm sorry, my love." and started to cut into my skin
     
  2. Oooh:) keep going!!
     
  3. Wow! I call #1 fan! This rocks! Kmp! Thanks for dedicating it to me!
     
  4. Your welcome
     
  5. Omg!! I love it! Keep going or i might die lol
     
  6. Haha I will, probaly tonight!
     
  7. Sorry guys but update shall be tomorrow! I'm focusing on finishing my first story, Hidden. Y'all should read it, I think it's pretty good.
     
  8. I watched as cut my forearm to the crook of my elbow. The tears started to stream out of my eyes. Something wet dripped on me and I realized he was crying also. He opened his mouth but shook his head then cut my wrist .then he started to carve my stomach an I started to scream."NONONOOOO!"
    I woke up sweating. I wiped the tears out of my eyes as I looked at the time. 5:47. Pretty good seeing as how that nightmare use to wake me up at 1. I got up and turned on the light, staring at my dark circles and pale shaken appearance. I shook my head and tried to unknot my thick brown hair. I should just cut it, I thought as I notice it went mid back. Maybe later. I pulled out my uniform,choosing the green polo over the blue one, and the tan plaid. I pulled up my black with green polka dotted tights and pulled on my sperrys. I was going to get up when I decided to lie down. This dream wasn't bad when it started. The guy was sweet and nice. One day he started to kill. Then he decided to kill me. I shivered and rubbed my eyes. I was suppose to get to school at 6:30 to give a tour to a new student. I sighed as I got up and grabbed my keys and a granola bar. I revved up my car and turned up the radio, singing to the new Gomez song."I I LOVE YOU LIKE A LOVE SONG BAYYYYBEEEE!" the light turned red and I stopped and started to dance. It was then that I noticed the boy staring at me. I couldn't see him well so I kept dancing and singing. The light turned green and I noticed that the car with the boy was tailgating me.
     
  9. Sorry y'all, it ain't that goo but the next update will be good(I hope)
     
  10. Oh my gosh! Right as I read the part about the song, it started playing on my TV. o_O
     
  11. Also, your story is awesome.
     
  12. I pulled in the school parking Lot and slammed my door shut."what the he11?"I muttered as the car pulled next to me. I walked over with my hand on the hood. "who are you and why in the world were you following me?" I asked angrily.I watched as a young man climbed out. He was clearly a head taller then me and had beautiful golden tan cutely messy hair. "sorry."he muttered, his voice sweet. Something tugged at the corner of my mind. I knew the voice. It was then that he looked up at me, his piercing blue eyes swallowing me whole. I stepped back out of reflex, my body wanting to escape as I remembered my nightmare."you." I said, my breath shaky as I turned and ran towards the school.
    I sat in the office,crossing and uncrossing my legs. "calm down Anya. Deep breaths." I closed my eyes and took 3 deep breaths. Then I opened them. And everything was still dark. I started to panic and put my hands to my eyes. And I found another pair of hands. "what?!" I cried and heard a tinkling laugh."Cassie!"I yelled and looked up. My best friend stood there with her hands in the air as if pleading guilty. I looked at her and noticed she was wearing the same uniform, only she choose the blue polo and white socks. She braided her blonde hair into a single braid over her shoulder. She was hot. No homo. She gave me a pity look and shook her head."your hair is a disaster." and she got to work doing a high ponytail and tying it with a tan ribbon as I told her about the boy resembling my dream killer. When she finished, she looked at my with pity. "I don't know what to say." I smiled at her and leaned on her shoulder."you don't have to say anything." Cassie, knowing me like she does, changed the subject."so, ready for the tour today?"I nodded, remembering the tour for our new student. The principal then came out and waved us in. We stood and followed him inside his office. There stood a familiar brown headed Boy."Analise Cruz. Cassie Jones. meet our new student Charles Moore, I expect you to show him respect." I watched as he turned around and smiled as his eyes grazed over me."So we meet again."
     
  13. It's great!!! Please continue
     
  14. Bump!! I love this!!
     
  15. Amazing! I love it! <3
     
  16. -Cassie-----------------------------------
    "and this is your last class of the day, which is also mine and anyas too!" Cassie said brightly, looking with greedy eyes at the new boy, Charles. She felt a pang of jealously as she watched Charles slowly take his eyes off of Anya so he could quickly smile at Cassie and stare at anya again."so is that the end of my tour, Analise?" Charles said with a silky voice as he tugged on her ponytail. Anya quickly moved out of his reach, which seemed to make him happier. "so which one of you lovely ladies wants to show me to my first class again?". Cassies heart almost leapt out of her chest. She knew that just a couple minutes alone with him would make him want her!she took a step forward when he said"how about you, analise?"
     
  17. Sorry for the short passage
     
  18. It was awesome!!! Bumpdate!!!!