Halloween Suprise!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *UltraViolet_ (01), Aug 9, 2011.

  1. She stared down at the mark and knew it was the same. They walked together to the alter and stared at the master emerald.

    Knuckled watched her sleep and passed out dreaming about her.

    In the morning she got up first and looked at knuckles and sang the beginning of the song truly, madly deeply.

    " I'll be your dream, I'll be your wish I'll be your fantasy... I'll be your hope I'll be your love, I'll be all that you need..."
    He woke up to her singing that to herself over and over again. He made himself move his hand closer to hers as she sang....

    " jaline?"

    " yeah?" she asked.

    " you have a beautiful voice...."

    " thank you." she replied as she became pink.

    " are you okay?" asked knuckles noticing she had tears in her eyes.


    " no..." she said giggling and still crying.

    " whats wrong?" he asked surprised.

    " I lost my virginity..." she said giggling and kissed knuckles. She could feel his face growing hot.
     
  2. He held her and she stopped.

    " knuckles?"
    " jaline?"

    " I love you more with every breath, truly madly deeply do." she said with her violet eyes shining.

    His jaw
    Dropped. He could not believe what he heard. He just wanted to be back home and hold her forever.

    " i love you too jaline."

    " do you want to go home?" she asked.

    " yes and spend the rest of my life with you."

    She was dumbstruck. She couldn't believe what she heard. She got up an pulled the 12 chaos emeralds out of her bag and set them on the alter.

    She said the words and angel island was back home. The moon shined bright over them.
    She sat down and fell into
    The grass. He sat by her and they held hands.
     
  3. Aww, I loved this one the most
     
  4. "knuckles?" she asked looking at him.

    "what?"

    " wanna go swimming?" she said pulling her top off reveling the mark.

    " sure. But..."

    " what's wrong?" she said.

    " the mark."

    " what mark?" she asked looking on her body.

    " that one." he said touching the mark on her chest.

    Knuckles glowed red when he looked up at her face. She stared at him and smiled. She kissed him and jumped and said" let's go!"

    She ran all the way there with knuckles. " are you ready?" she asked smiling.

    " definitely." he said looking at her.

    They jumped in and scrambling when she landed on him. When she bobbed up she was pink. " I'm so sorry knuckles!" she said.
     
  5. " it's okay, but..."

    " what?"

    " I'll show you."
    They walk up shore and knuckles sat her down. She layed down whistling the song she sang to him.

    Suddenly something got into jaline and she climbed on top of him.

    " jaline! What are you doing?"


    " nothing...." she said giggling and getting closer to his face.

    " I could stay like this all day you know?" she said she smirked.


    Visiting Angel Island was rouge as she walked along until she saw a sight that broke her heart into pieces.

    " KNUCKLES?!" screamed rouge.

    Jaline lowered her voice and asked"who is she?"

    Knuckles stood up slowly and folded his arms and stared at rouge as jaline did the same.
     
  6. Continue this is getting good
     
  7. " rouge?! What are you doing here?!?"

    " looking for chaos emeralds. What the Fu- are you doing on her?!" she yelled.

    Jaline got up and ran. She sat down in the grass. Next to her was a flower. She picked it not realizing knuckles was watching behind her. There were nine petals.


    The first one" he loves me." the second."he loves me not." the third" he loves me."
    The fourth" he loves me not." the fifth" he loves me." the sixth" he loves me not." the seventh" he loves me." the eighth." he loves me not.

    On the ninth petal as she said and he said" I love you.".

    She turned around and saw him. Still moonlight and it was still shining, she asked hurt and heartbroken" weeds rouge?"

    " she left. She was crying." she got closer to him

    " I love you...."


    That's the end. Sooo who's next. Not ready for a sonic story.
     
  8. Aww I love the ending
     
  9. Thank you! I just need a a decision silver, tails, shadow?
     
  10. SHADOOWWW!

    This is about two hedgehogs, no Chloe it's not shadamy.

    : THE STORE.

    Shadow walked along the aisles of the store looking for potion ingredients. Looking in his surrounding he saw one like he, a hedgehog couldn't reach a potion ingredient.


    Spectra swayed in her dress as she walked to find her potions main ingredient, dragon blood.

    She jumped and it still didn't work.
    Shadow walked over to spectra and asked.

    " do you need some help?"

    " yes." she said looking down. He quickly grabbed the bottle and said" here."

    " thank you."

    " Uh.. Here." she gave him an envelope and walked away fast before shadow opened it.

    " dear stranger,
    I am spectra, a witch.

    I'm going out this coming Friday and I'm wondering if you want to come with me?"
    <3 use the address to find the place. I'll be waiting.

    -Spectra
     
  11. Lol.


    : FRIDAY NIGHT:

    Shadow walked in the streets and Eventually found the place.
    Spectra waited outside.

    " spectra?" asked shadow standing by her.
    She nodded and showed her face. Her royal blue hair glowed above her black body.

    " I'm shadow." he said shanking her
    Hand.
    " what's the deal?"
    He asked looking at spectras orange eyes.

    " you helped me. I'm thanking you." she said pointing to the bar.
     
  12. " why thank you." he said looking behind him as he walked in.

    Spectras glasses where shinning under the lights and the red and black of her dress seemed to be a moving star itself.

    She appeared on the dance floor moving quickly. Shadow was there as well watching her he stepped out and she was as straight serious as before.


    " spectra... Come with me." shadow said taking her hand and dragging her outside. On the side of the building they stood.

    " spectra." shadow said snapping his fingers to get her attention from the stars.
    She snapped out of it.

    " hm?"

    " you dance well..." he said being red and looked away from her.

    " thank you."
    She said that lifting his chin and looked into his red eyes. " something's wrong shadow,isn't there?"
     
  13. ^_^. Awww well... SONAMY STILL FTW. BUT SHADAMY OMFG.



    ^_^. And OMG spectra!!! Pretty witch name!
     
  14. >_>. Thank God it's kunxouge....





    TikalxKnuckles= okay.




    JulieSuxKnuckles=. RUNNN!!!! THE AGGRESIVENESS!!!!!! HELLPPPP!!!!
     
  15. " what? No I'm fine."

    " something's wrong shadow." I maybe a hedgehog but I'm not ordinary and neither are you."


    " spectra...."

    " yes?" she said resting her head against the bricks of the building.

    " the moment I saw you I wanted to do something but couldn't get my self to do." he said looking into her orange topaz eyes.

    " what is it?"

    " to kiss you."

    She hugged shadow and said" off it makes you feel better, I can kiss you right now." she said smiling when she let go.


    " thanks." said shadow.
    Right there and then the sparks flew and she kissed him. He held her in his arms.
     
  16. " don't be afraid to tell me anything. Remember I know everything except the future."


    " can you be sure about it?" said shadow smirking and holding her closer.

    " I'm pretty sure I meant everything when I said it." she said looking away.