 Ghostly Love 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *_NicoleTheShortie_ (01), Aug 10, 2011.

  1. Intro
    The year is 1803. The snow falls innocently around my limp body. I can only stare at it. I can't do much more than that. Blood flows freely from my chest.
    "Aurora!", a familiar voice cries out.
    I automatically recognized this voice. My father's. He starts to sob uncontrollably.
    "Dad. Look.", I said, waving my hands about. "I'm right here!"
    Yet, he continuted to cry. My mother came outside, she must have heard him crying.
    "John? What's going on out there?", she asked, approching him. I saw her gasp and fall to her knees. They sat there, holding on to each other. How i wanted to reach out and tell them i was here. That i was alive. Breathing and well. But i wasnt. I turned my back to them, unable to watch. A small light at the end of the street glowed, like a fire. I slowly walked towards it, but something came out at mr first. A woman with a long flowing dress, hugh white wings behind her. She offered her hand to me. I only looked at her. At once, i knew who she was.
    "NO!", i screamed. "THIS CAN'T BE!!!"
    I fell to my knees, unable to speak.
    "Yes my dear.", The angel said. "I have come here to take you to a better place."
    She smiled. Before i knew it, I hiked up my dress and ran. I looked behind me to see if she followed. She didnt. She only watched me, this time a grimance replacing her friendly, warm smile.
     
  2. Nice story do a chapter two plz
     
  3. More!!!!!