Addictions

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *BunanzaTheBunny (01), Aug 3, 2011.

  1. When will there be MORE????
     
  2. Writing an update as we speak.
     
  3. Awesome story!! Does his mom want him to leave and never come back, or to leave because she thinks he needs to go outside more?
     
  4. Ryan packed the last of his possessions into the bag. His room was almost empty , except for a bed . He would miss his room.

    Ryan walked outside without saying goodbye to his mom. It was likely he wouldn't see her again , but she was dead to him by now.

    Since Ryan couldn't afford his own place , he would have to stay with someone else for a while. Someone who wouldn't charge , and is hardly home.

    Ricky.

    As much as he hated the thought of it , he knew he had to. It was the only choice he had , unless he wanted to rent out a room somewhere. But he was critical low on cash . Probably would need to get a job.




    He knocked on Ricky's door as hard as he could, and soon after , a man holding a blanket to his chest appeared , with a half naked woman behind him.

    "Ryan? What's up?"

    "Hey Ricky ... Sorry I didn't call ahead , but I need a place to
    crash for a few nights , can I stay here?"

    Ricky glanced over at the woman , who had an inpatient look on her face.


    "Fine. But you sleep on the couch." Ricky said.


    "Thanks."

    "No problem .... come on babe..."


    Ryan dropped his bag on the flor and lay on the couch , staring up at the ceiling . He couldn't stay at Ricky's for long , where would he go afterwards ?

    Ryan woke up the next morning to find Ricky and the girl sprawled across the bed .

    "Usual Ricky.." Ryan said with a grin.


    Ryan began walking down the street to the nearest McDonalds . He would have to work there until he could afford an apartment.

    On the way there he so something familiar . Rachel's house.....




    "I know it isn't much , but this is it." Rachel said , gesturing towards her house .


    Ryan looked at Rachel. He couldn't draw his eyes away from her's , as if they sucked him in. He loved her. He loved her long , flowing , jet black her. He loved her laugh , her smile.

    A smile formed on his lips.

    "I like it." Ryan said.


    "Come on in."


    The house was small , but had a comfortable feeling to it. The wooden floor was chipped in some places, but fit in with the rest of the house .

    "Do your parents know I'm here?" Ryan asked.

    "Nope , they're out of town tonight , some Greek mythology convention." Rachel replied , a grin forming on her face. "Let me show you around."

    Rachel led him through the house , labeling each room as they walked by.

    "....and this , is my room."


    Her room looked like any other . The grey walls were lined with posters from her favorite band , Green day.

    She sat on her bed , which lay in the corner.

    "Like I said , it's nothing special...."

    "Much better than what I have." Ryan said , sitting down next to her , pretending to take an interest in his surroundings.

    Rachel let out a tiny giggle.

    "What?"

    "You got something...right there." She said , taking a piece of hot dog off the corner of his mouth.

    They both stared at eachother , then leaned in for the kiss.

    It started as just an ordinary kiss , but it became much more. His mind and heart went to a different place when she put her warm lips against his.

    They kissed for a while , then she ran her hand down his back....
     
  5. sebby, I love it
     
  6. Yes very good update!
     
  7. Goldluka! You were my first fan!
     
  8. Good job man! Can't wait for more!- Black Magic
     
  9. Where is my update boi?!
     
  10. I see no change from last night ._. Squishy! Hurry up and write 
     
  11. Bump.
    This is great!! Very down to earth.