Captured

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *ILUVJB11 (01), Aug 3, 2011.

  1. This is how i died would u luke to find out?

    It was an agust afternoon and i was jut walking home from
    School see ive been having this problem everytime i walk to school this van drives next to
    Me i run for miles it goes faster and this is were it all begins,

    Finally getting them off my tail i arrive to school do my regular classes and i ask my bestfriend alex to walk me home because of this car so he did but walking that man came sone came up from behind and put medicine cotton on alexs mouth thats steroids that make u fall asleep he passes out and then grab me by my hair and take me im screaming but my screams cant be heard....They finally stop the car and bring me to there house and lock me in the basemeant i say stop and o let me go they they beat me and beat me as im all blacl and blue and bloddy i dont no what to do i finally escape and find alex i spent the night at his place but they found me and woke me up and sufficated me in my sleep



    Should i keep going 5  if its good
     
  2. Keep going
     
  3. It just keeps going and going....... Please use periods. I like it so far
     
  4. It's a great story! But please use punctuations and quotations. :)