Okay, so I've been wanting to write this story for a long time, but I couldn't find the muse, until just recently. So here it is, the geners of this story is Horror/Romance/Comedy/Pickles lol enjoy you guys! ~The Wars Of Prunia~(chapter 1) I felt a sharp pain through my stomach. It felt cold, and I felt the blood start to rush out. I coughed up blood, my eyes wide in pain, and shock. How did this happen? I only let my guard down for a second, and yet, here I am, my vision blurred. I looked up to see, my opponent, Hector. "H-Hector..."I managed to say, before taking my sword, and plunging it through his heart. He collapsed, and I did, shortly after. "ALICE!!"I heard Prince Eili yell. "AL!!!"Princess Rosy yelled, killing her opponent, and running to my side. My breath shortened, and my heart beat slowed. I grabbed the sword, and pulled it out of my stomach, with a loud grunt in pain. Eili ran to my side as well. Tears in both of their eyes. Eili put his hand over my wound, and slowly began to chant. I stopped him. "n-no, i-it's t-to l-late"I gasped, and removed his hands, slowly. "no it's not! Please! Let me heal you!"he yelled. I shook my head. "p-please, d-don't c-cry f-for m-me..."I whispered, and he grabbed my hand. I felt numb, and everything was fuzzy, and began to spin. After a few seconds of this, another blur came into view. I could make out their face, just a little. It was my brother, Darken. A small smile left my blood covered lips, before everything blacked out. I knew my eyes weren't closed, I still felt numb, and cold. "Alice, p-please d-don't l-leave m-me..."I heard Eili, as a felt warmth on my hand, though I couldn't feel his tears, falling on my skin. At this point, I could speak no longer. My heart beat slowed even more, to an almost stop. The warmth on my hand disappeared, never to return again. I mouthed the words 'Eili, I love you' before everything, stopped. "n-no...N-No...NO!"Eili yelled. Rosy, his sister, began to cry on Darken's shoulder, as Darken looked away, from his sister's now dead body. Right now, your probably wondering, did I skip to the last chapter? Who are all these people? And why did Alice die? Who's Hector? And what's Prunia? First of all, you didn't skip to the last chapter, and secondly, the story is about to start. I am just a Narrator. What you just read, up there, that's what's going to happen in the end. Now, shall we go back in time? How about, when the war first started, it would be, about twenty years ago. On a continent, called Prunia. In the palace, a baby boy, and baby girl, had just been born. They were twins. The boys name, was Eili, the fourth Prince. The little girls name, was Rosy, the Fourth Princess. The Queen, Sarah, and her Husband, King Rikishi, have eight children. It's a tradition, in Prunia, for the King and his Queen, to have more then six children. Eili, and Rosy are the youngest, and the last, for the kingdoms beloved Queen, has passed away, giving birth to the twins. The king, was just, but loved his queen very much. He didn't blame Rosy, and Eili, he just loved them with all his heart, like he did the rest of his children. Now, your probably asking, what does this have to do with the war? Well on another part of This planet, far far away, was a land called Muscia. The King of Prunia's brother, ruled this country. His name was King Hector. He and his wife Queen Jessabel, had just had their first child. You see, along time ago, Hector, and Rikishi's father, had banished Hector, to Muscia, a barren, and bleak country. Hector swore revenge against Rikishi, for his father loved Rikishi more. Rikishi, had sent a small amount of his army to Muscia, as a gift to his brother. But behind his back, the army, was planning on killing, Hector and his family. When they reached the palace, late at night, Hector, his wife, and their new baby boy, were asleep. The general of this army's name, was Solasido. He infiltrated the castle, and killed Hector's wife, and child. Hector woke, up in time to see the beheading of his beloved wife. He became filled with rage, and slaughtered Rikishi's army, and declared war, between Rikishi, and himself. When Rikishi heard this, he sobbed, at the thought, of him and his brother fighting. He agreed to this war, only to keep his people safe. A decry went put, that every year, a six year old child, would be taken from every family, each year. If a family had no children, or the children weren't six, they would have to send one person from the family. One year after Eili and Rosy's birth, a poor, peasant family, had a child, a baby girl, who they named Alice. She was a very special baby girl. She was born into a family, of a father, mother, and older brother. Let's speed time up a bit, to Five years later, when Alice's brother, is about to leave. Now, I shall bid you, farewell, as it's the story's turn, to tell, itself. "Darken! Please, don't go!"a five year old girl, with brown hair, and loving purple eyes, yelled. A six year old boy stood, with lonish, brown, hair and deep blue eyes. A boy, wise beyond his years, and stronger then any, six year old, boy in Prunia. He smiled warmly at his little sister. "Alice, I need to go, if I don't the family will be forced to go, instead of it just being myself."Darken told his little sister. Crocodile tears began to stream down Alice's face. She loved her older brother, and was very attached to him, for their father, had left two years ago, and Darken took charge, and became a strong figure, and a roll model, to the small family. Alice ran to her brother, wrapping her fragile thin arms around her brother in a good bye, hug. "I'll miss you"she sniffed. "I'll miss you to, but don't worry, I'll see you again, and I'll see you soon to"he told her, trying to keep her from crying. Se nodded, as she sniffed, and wipes the tears away with her sleeve. "y-you promise"she asked. "I promise"Darken said, then turned around, getting into the small carriage, filled with other six your old children. The Knight, driving the carriage, took the reins and snapped them, as the horse whinnied, and took off. As Darken waves good bye to his sister. Alice waved good bye, and after he was far out of sight, she began to sob again. "I I miss you already!"she yelled to no one. She picked up a stick, and began to draw circles in the ground, as thunder began to crack loudly. This young lady, loved the rain, and as she looked up to the sky, it began to down pour. He giggled, and stood up. Twirling in the rain, as the lightning strikes, and the thunder, cracked. She continued this action, only to bump heads, with a young man. He was about her age, with golden hair, deep green eyes, and freckles on his nose. Alice rubbed her forehead, and the boy rubbed his. The boy was wearing, fine clothing. The colors of scarlet, blue, and royal purple. He had a hair extension, only this hair extension wasn't hair, it was of jewels, and other rarities, like rubies, and emeralds. Their were four emeralds, and three diamonds, but one beautiful ruby. "I'm sorry"Alice apologized. "you're forgiven"the boy said, and made a hand movement, as if sending her off. "whatcha doin, with your hand?"she asked the boy, confused. "Eili!! Where, did you go!!"a loud, and strong voice called. The blonde boy looked frightened, so the young girl assumed, he was in trouble. Alice remembered, where she was, she knew this kingdom like the back of her hand. She grabbed the boy's hand and led him away from the road, and deep into the forest. As the rain fell on them, the walk was silent, until the boy had had enough, of Alice touching him. "who are you? And where are you taking me?"he demanded. "my name is Alice, Alice Verelles, and you looked scared of that voice, so I was going to lead you to a place, where you could hide"she told him, innocent eyes. The boy nodded, relaxing a bit. "who are you?"she asked him. The boy was shocked at first, but when he saw the girls tattered, and worn clothes, and noticed she had what looked to be sandals and her legs and arms were covered in, cuts, bruises, scabs, and scrapes, he realized that she wasn't familiar with the royal family. He let out a deep sigh, as if troubled by this. "I am Prince Eili, Prince Eili Farities, of Prunia. The Seventh in line, for the throne"he told her, with a small smirk on his lips. Alice was shocked at first, but then bowed to him. "I'm sorry, I didn't show you the proper respect."she mumbled. "you're forgiven, and who you were hiding me from, is my brother, the family is playing, a game of hide and seek, and my brother was it."he told her. Alice's head stayed bowed. "oh, where are your guard? And where is your family's guard? Normally, there's an announcement, telling us of your arrival, and that we aren't allowed, outside our homes, until your all gone."she told. Although, her family, had no money to put her in school, she was taught well, by her brother, father, and mother. She was also, wise beyond her years. "well, my father told them, we didn't need all of that, this time. And would you pick your head up already?"he told her, and also commanded her. She picked her head up, and saw the King, in all his glory, behind Eili. He was speechless, and bowed. "I told yo-"Eili began, but stopped, as his father picked him up, and chuckled. "I see you've found a new friend, Eili. And who might she be?"the King spoke. His voice, deep and manly, but calming and sweet, at the same time. "m-my name i-is Alice V-Verelles, your m-majesty"she stuttered, as she stayed bowed. The king chuckled, and put a strong hand on her shoulder. "you may rise, child"he told her, with a smile on his face. She smiled back at the King. The kind King, had golden hair, and blue eyes. Alice smiled at the King, a bright, and beautiful smile. Now, was that a better beginning? Of course is was. But the story is not over, and I forgot to say, that when the six year olds get taken away, they are in a military school, where they learn to be, the best knights they can be. So that when they're older, they can fight in the war. As for the older family members, such as Alice's father, when he was taken away, was sent into war, probably never to be seen again. At this point, your probably wondering, 'Where's Alice's mother? And how come the royal family just suddenly showed up?' well, I must tell you, that Eili, and Alice's meeting that day, was an act of fate. For everyday, for the rest of that year, the meet together, and play. Until that fateful day, when Alice is taken away. Let's go to that day, where the poor Prince waits alone. Eili sat on the edge of a bank, where Alice and him, would normally meet. He had taken quit a liking to Alice, and enjoyed her company greatly. He had been waiting for quit sometime now, and was beginning to think, that Alice stood him up. The young boy, ha no idea about the six year olds who where being taken away, by decry. He heard a crack of thunder, he was now seven years old, and Alice is six. When they met each other, she was five, and he was six. Alice was kind, and she taught him, how to be respectful, of others, and how to talk to people, who didn't know anything about the royal family. She also told him, that the way he had acted to her, when they first met, was rude. "maybe her mother told her, she couldn't come out today..."the poor lonely boy said. "I'll give her, another hour, or two"he said, hoping, that shed be there at any minute. The truth was, Alice had been taken, like Darken before her. Never to return. So, the poor prince, would be waiting, when no one would come. After the first day she didn't show, he returned, on the second day, hoping that because it was now sunny, she would come out. On the third day, he knew it was hopeless, but he waited for her anyway. He began to cry silently, thinking that she didn't like him anymore, and didn't want to be his friend. The fourth day, his depression was noticed by his family, but he waited at the bank, anyway. The breeze blew gently, as he waited, as if telling him, that it would be alright. He took his shows off, and rolled his pants up, and stepped into the water, enjoying the feeling of the cold stream. "if she doesn't come today, I don't know what I'll do..."he told himself. He sighed, a great sigh. His twin Rosy, walked up to the bank. Her blonde hair, blowing in the breeze, like her brothers. Her green eyes, watched him sadly. "brother, who is this she, your waiting for, and why isn't she coming?"she asked, her fancy dress, was a sign of royalty, and she also had a hair extension, exactly like her brothers, except there were four emeralds, and four diamonds, and one ruby, showing she was eighth in line for the throne. Eili sighed. "no one, well at least not of your concern, just go back home, and leave me alone...."he told her. Rosy nodded, but didn't say anything, as she continued to walk home, hoping her brother would follow her. But to her dismay, he did not. On the eighth day, he waited, but she didn't show, he left. The next day, he didn't wait, and he never went back to wait. He began to act coldly, to others. He also began to treat, ladies with no respect at all. Never forgiving Alice, for leading him on like that, and by the time he was ten, he realized that what he felt for Alice, was a crush. Only to make the pain hurt worse, as he realized she hadn't liked him back. From the day Alice disappeared, a cut grew on his heart, and it continues to grow, as a deep scar, never to be healed. Year later, when the young Prince was sixteen, a contest was being held, for the children who are leaving the military school. Among these contestents, unknown to Eili, was Alice. This contest was to find out, who would become apart of the Great Eight, an eliet guard, that is for the Princes and Princesses protection, only. The contest had started, and the first to fight, was Darken. He fought against a knight of the round table. A powerful, knight. As the royal family watched this, Rosy began to take a liking to Darken. He had grown up quit well, he had brown hair, and amazing blue eyes. His hair was as long as Eili's.(aka a Justin beiber hair cut )Darken wore armor, which you could not see his face, but it was knocked off, by the knight. In the end, Darken had won, and was a member of the guard. Next, was a man named Josh, he also became a guard. Then a girl named Julia. This continued on, until there was, four boys, and three girls. The last battle was watched by everyone, but Eili. Eili wasn't even in the stadium. Alice was saddened by this, she remembered Eili, but she thought he didn't remember her. She was only fifteen, and she had won against, a thirty five year old, knight of the round table. She became apart of the eilet guard. Later on, it came time, when the guard would meet who they would be guarding. Darken, was guarding Princess Rosy, Josh was to guard Princess Amber, Julia to Prince Drake. As for Alice, she was to guard Eili, yet he still didn't know it was her. They had names, pertaining to their swords. Darken's sword was called Crusifiction, his nickname was, Crusade. Alice's sword's name, was Twenty demands, and her nickname is Al. They had to wear they're armor, all the time. You couldn't recognize them. The only way you could tell the difference between any of them, was the color and shape of their armor. I don't know about you, but after a while, I want to know what their thinking. How about we look at their point of views, shall we? *Eili's pov* I yawned. I was bored, and a guard in red, and silver armor kept following me. I knew why, but it was weird. They were wearing a helmet, so I couldn't see their face. I glared at the knight behind me. /by the jape of the armor, it looks like a girl. Or a really odd looking man.../I thought, and kept walking down the corridor. I passed my twin Rosy, to see she had a knight following her to, only she was talking to her's, and he had his helmet off. "what's your name?"I asked them. "just call me Al..."They said. The metal made they're voice sound odd, so I was still guessing they were a girl, or an odd looking man. When 'Al' walked there was no metal 'clank' like they're was with the four of the others, it would seem, as if they were trying to be graceful, or they were floating a few inches above the ground. /yea right, like that would ever happen. The only people who can use magic, is father and grandfather. I can't even use it.../I thought making the 'pffff' noise. I walked To my grandfathers bedroom. "you stay outside the door, I'm going in, understand?"I told her. /god women are so stupid.../I thought as Al nodded. I walked in, and my grandpa was deathly ill. I walked to the his bed side. "E-Eili, is t-that you?"he asked. His voice low, and strained. "yes, it's me grandpa."I replied. I kneeled at his bed side, and grabbed his hand. His pulse began to slow. "G-Grandpa!!"I said. "m-my time to leave this world, h-has come. Eili, I-I am going to give you my magic. Y-You have great p-potential."he said. "no! Grandpa, stay with me! Please!"I yelled. "y-you have a great d-destiny, and m-my magic, will h-help y-you."he said, his pulse slowed further. To an almost halt. "AL!!"I yelled, and Al came running in, the sword drawn. What we saw next, was something incredible. Light blue colors flew up, to the top of the room, springing from his body. It seemed as if all of time was frozen. The beauty was hard to describe. As the colors floated above us, it fluttered all around. The color purple began to mix with the blew, in what seem like fireworks. It danced gracefully, around Al. As if it enjoyed her greatly. It dances around her sword, and around her armor. After it was finished, it swirled in a whirl pool fashion around me. It seem as if time sped up when this happened. The room spun, but I didn't. I saw the night sky. But it ended just as quickly as it began. But a necklace hung around my neck glowing, a ruby colored ball hung from a silver chain. I looked over at my grandfather, and he was pale, to pale to be alive, and his hand was cold. A single tear escaped from my tear ducts, and fell on the ruby. It glowed brighter, and flowed around my grandfathers body. Healing, his dead body, closing his eyes, and putting a smile on his face. This wasn't even half, the power of my grandfathers magic.
I love your story!! I especially like how the narrator told the story, asking questions and changing point of views.
Really? Wow, I've never inspire anyone before it makes me feel all fuzzy on the inside, and wanted
Lol I did make you a blonde but I can't tell you why yet and I made him to your specific liking dude