Funny, silly and goofy, We can make a movie. Lips stay lookin juicy, I'm into you truly. All eyes on your booty, But you're a cutie. So thick by design, How'd you get this fine? Laying up and kissing, I got what you're missing. We don't need a title, As long as I make you smile. I'm your latest addiction, My vibe is pharmaceutical. Our business isn't universal, Cause we're equivocal. I can't cap you're beautiful, You're a breath of fresh air. You're oxygen hitting my lungs, Not many can compare. A rich, deep, chocolate, I need more than a taste of it. You are you, Black and beautiful. Some may find you unusual, The hate is just trivial. Stronger than a he it's true, It's obviously provable. We vibe like a musical, You flow like the sea. Your race is NOT removable, It's radiant and holy. Let them show envy, Your freedom isn't undoable. The power you hold is irreducible, You're pretty but you sting like a bee.
I like the poem but I don’t get the line “people may find you unusual” since you described her as beautiful and thicc in the first few paragraphs, like wouldn’t everybody be all over her. Also I think most people would ignore her unusual personality as long as she’s hot. I really like the last line, Its ironic how you were stung by her even tho you didn’t want to put a “title” on the relationship. And I like the last line in general
I didn't write the poem I wrote this based on, so I can't explain why she thinks people find her unusual. If I had to guess, it'd be her personality, because it makes her more noticeable than many other pretty women. It's vibrant, bubbly, unique and she's exotic, while she's also silly and goofy at the same time. Also, you could factor in her skin complexion as well. Many women with darker skin complexions don't receive as much praise as those with lighter skin complexions in the black community. I felt obligated to express that people will hate on her for it, but they're opinions are trivial. The last line is like, I don't want to put at title, but at the same time, she's left her mark on me.
she’s exotic cuz she’s black? Lmao whut sounds like a fetish type but whatever. I think I know what you mean now, either way great poem
NO, LMFAO. She's not black black. Shorty mixed, but that's not what I'm getting at. It's like a... inside joke.
So you’re saying mixed people aren’t black? Like I understand if by mixed you mean one parent is asian and another is white then of course they can’t be black. But if you mean mixed as in one parent is black and the other is white then they’re most definitely still black. I don’t care how “light skinned” they look, they’re still black. But then again, everything I just said might not even matter cuz you said it’s an inside joke so I don’t have enough information to make assumptions.
ex·ot·ic /iɡ-zädik/ adjective 1. originating in or characteristic of a distant foreign country. She could just be from a country or something. But like I didn't read all that so I'm just dropping this here.
I don't argue with women. I understand that they're arguing skills or superior so I just nod my head in silence.
I know I can't win, but I'll nod my head without listening and kept telling you phrases like, "you're always right," "I'm wrong," "I apologize," and "mhm." "Mhm" is a classic.