Infect Me With Your Love~

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *CheekyChloe (01), Jul 22, 2011.

  1. This will be my thread for all my short romances!! Post yours too! Must be short though!
     
  2. Sorry bout that useless info thing^

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    Staring out into his cold eyes in the heavy rain, I sighed. I knew I couldn't stop myself, and I didn't want to. He looked so perfect... Too perfect. This would always make me think; why is he falling for me? I'm the plain Americano, pale skin, brunette hair, lime green eyes, freckly, fake smile, why? He was the perfect blonde, blue eyes, beautiful tan skin, sexy posture... He was almost... Godlike. He was an alien. I inhaled some more air and walked up to him. No, it didn't matter if I was soaking wet. I needed to talk to him; badly.

    "Why... Why do you love me? I'm the plain useless girl... You're the knight in shining armor! Why?!"

    Yes. Girls these days like myself, always insecure, always so fussy, so picky, so plain, so... Unsure. We would occasionally be used just to get some laughs by others and get tossed away like a rag. But It's not this. Who is he. Why is he here. What's my fate. How did he know me. So full of curiosity and so full of questions. They all must be answered.

    "My dear, isn't the answer simple? I love you."

    Before I could continue this arguement, he had kissed me. Not those pecks of tease or those smooches to be funny, this was the real deal. Real deal as in he had KISSED me. And I liked it. No, I had loved it. The kiss was so smooth, so loving, so passionate... So... So... Unhuman. It was different from the kisses I had recieved. This one was sent from Heaven. It was a gift from God Himself. Just as he was kissing me, I had kissed back. I had no intention of breaking the kiss. But how much I wanted to strangle him with my arms and deepen the kiss, we had to break it to breathe. We pulled apart, gasping for air. I looked up at him, he was smiling. His cold eyes became warm ones, he looked just like an angel.

    "I love you."

    And with that, I ran into his open arms and flung my arms around his neck, not intending to let go. Just melt into him, and drown in the rain, whispering nothing but "I love you" into each others ears.
     
  3.  that's so romantic.
     
  4. Thank you! I come up with all my stories while writing it and the title. 
     
  5. Well your good. You should write a full story.
     
  6. I can never finish since there's always a dead end in them. Tsk. My full stories suck.
     
  7. I just started writing. I'm not that satisfied with mine yet. I think it all up as I go along. Nothing is planned out.
     
  8. I'm bored soo... Tada! Anither short one. Completely unrelated. And as for the title, it indicates most of my romances will be un-humanly. Lolz soz, if you are planning to write them too, no need to worry bout it! Mostly the lyrics to E.T. Are pretttyyy smexxeih like this one^^. lol. Im such a perv. XD


    I won't be posting here cuz I neefa think. 
     
  9. This is awesome!!!!! I'm your no.1 fan for horror stories lol. U inspired me to write the Black Widow. Not that it's done yet lol
     
  10. That's really good Sophie. It's romantic. 
     
  11. Thosee two stories are relle good!! Well here's mine. First one ever written on PIMd! Plz let me know

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    " He doesnt love you" he whispered.

    " Yes, he does" i said, crying. " you dont know him, he'll come back for me. I know it"

    " I wish you would just be with me" he said, with sad eyes.

    " Juan, we've talked about this. I dont love you that way" i whispered the last few words.

    " Ale..." he lift my chin up to face him. His eyes were watery and i felt the pain he felt. The pain of loving someone who didnt love you back. " i'm in love with you".
    Juan was my bestfriend. He knew all my secrets And i loved him. I did. Just not enough to change anything.

    " He'll be back. He has to" i said, wiping the tears away. I knew Daniel would be back. He had left me without saying anything. But we were far in love for him to just leave me. I had been crying the whole day because he had left.
    Daniel hadnt showed to school, or gone to my house afterschool. So i drove to his house, and found no one there. No one. The house was empty as if no one had ever lived there.
    " my heart beats for him, and only him" i said. I got up from the bench we had been sitting on, and started wAlking towards his car. Juan followed me and quickly opened the door for me and waited until i got inside. I was quiet the whole ride home.
    " I always thought there was something odd about Daniel. He seemed, i dont know," he said uncomfortably, biting a lip. "a bit too perfect to be true. Ale i can make you happy, without hurting you". At that point he had pulled on my driveway and parcked there.

    " I know," i said and got off, went inside and closed the door behind me.
    Daniel was glorious. He was like a dream. His brown curly hair was perfect. His big perfect lips were addicting. Daniel had something no one else had. He had a magnet that pulled me towards him. We were meant to be, i knew it.
    We had been going out for three months and now he was gone. Gone. And then i began crying again. I cried so hard my heart ached. My knees trembled and my lip quivered. I finally fell on the floor, crying and next i saw nothing, just darkness...
     
  12. Bumpp ! Guys tell me what u think