Reality Check

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Allison_DiLaurentis (01), Jul 19, 2011.

  1. Oh and check out the new girl more updates
     
  2. Okay so is anybody reading this?
     
  3. Yay!! Haha thanks for reading. Your character will be in the next update
     
  4. I am pretty good
     
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  6. Yay an update soon
     
  7. I'm pretty sure
     
  8. Ryan walked me to first period and before leaving kissed me on the cheek. Ms. G eying him down giving him the look that meant business. No more PDA.

    I walked into the chemistry lab and took my usual spot next to Sean. He has been my best friend since the sixth grade and had been through everything with me since then. And if you know me. You know I go through a lot of crap.

    Sean had dark brown shaggy hair and blue eyes. Hes taller than me and he is the sweetest guy ever. He has a smile that is contagious and always wears his letterman jacket. He is a little shy but once you get to know him. He's hilarious. But He dosnt get much attention at home though. He has this brat of a little brother and his older brother is a basketball star. (And a jerk.) Sean had played football since about the third grade. And He is actually pretty good but nobody gives him credit for it. I can't even remember the last time his parents came to a game. And even if I wasn't forced to go to them I would go to every single game.

    "somebodys in trouble...." Sean said
    "shut up." I said as I laughed.
    Sean had this funny face on (that look like a girl on the cover of a romance novel. You know. The one where she is gazing out the window waiting for prince charming) and made this gagging noise. I laughed.

    "good morning class. Today we will be working in our books. Open to page 362 and read through 370 and answer the questions that follow on a piece of notebook paper. "

    Sean and I looked at eachother and I rolled my eyes. Sean laughed.

    Chemistry was my least favorite class. I hated mr. Nelon. He was so boring and everything he said was in a monitone voice. He never changed his facial expressions. And always wore the dumbest outfit. Sweater vests pants long sleve dress shirts and stupid shoes. Can you say ew?

    It was also my favorite. I got an hour with Sean. Enough said.

    An hour later I was done and the bell rang. I got up and took my tine getting out of the lab.

    When I got to the door Ryan was already there. And so was Sean. Ryan put his arm around my shoulder. And Sean looked upset as ryan did and they walked with me to gym. They had football practice and I had cheer practice. (wonderful. I thought) I walked into the girls locker room saying bye to both of them as I did.

    "Look who is finally here!! It took you long enough Maeghan." Kaelynn said making a kissy face. Makayla walked over to me and grabbed my cheer bag from my shoulder. Walked over to my locker. Opened it and threw in my cheer bag.

    "God makayla. How the hell do you always manage to figure out my combo. That's the fourth time this year!!"

    She laughed and shrugged her shoulders. I walked over to her. Hugged her and threw my backpack in the locker. Making sure to close and lock it.

    We walked out into the gym and started stretching. Coach Murphy walked in and had a mad expression on her face. We all knew. She was way. Way. P.Oed about something. We where in hell.
     
  9. I just realized. My updates are really long. Haha
     
  10. Its good! And dont worry, my updates are always lengthy lol.
     
  11. Thanks! Haha can't wait for another one!! When will there be one?
     
  12. I don't know /: I'm temporarily not updating. Personal problems. There will be an update soon enough though.
     
  13. @da wolf. What do you think of your character?
     
  14. I also love ur story and I think it is good they r a bit longer more detail and more to read!! 
     
  15. My character is rlly cool and I know something tho not gonna give it away