Magic

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Allison_DiLaurentis (01), Jul 18, 2011.

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    Thx, ~A

    Knock knock knock. "hello? Anybody home?" "Comming!" Torian ran down the stairs to open the door. "well it took you long enough. Haha" Colleen laughed and walked into the Day's house. Torian and Colleen walked up the stairs to Tori's room.

    Haven, McKenna, and Ashliegh where already up in the room getting ready for the spring formal. Tonight was the most important night of their freshman year. They had been waiting for this night all year and it was finally here. Five dresses where in garment bags layed out carefully on Torian's bed. Suitcases where all over the room spitting out make up or curling irons or shoes. Five girls laughed in front of the mirror. Colleen walked over to the radio and hit play. Immediately music came blasting out as the girls started dancing to Jessie J's price tag. Singing as they curled their hair. "OWW Ashliegh!!! You burned me!!" Haven screamed "Sorry. My phone buzzed in my pockett and scared the crap outa me." " whatever just don't do it again I don't want to look beaten up. Haha" Haven laughed. " who texted you anyways?" " It's probably Zach. " Colleen chimed in with a face that was as funny as any of them had ever seen. " oh shut up." Ashliegh said. They all burst out laughing.

    Thirty minutes later five girls walked down the stair case. With curls bouncing up and down as she walked Torian got to the bottom first and grabbed the camera. "MOM WE NEED OUR PICTURES TAKEN!!" Torian screamed as the girls all giggled. Just then the doorbell rang and three boys walked in. "Hey ladies. Who is ready for the best night ever?" "Brant!! Your here!!! I thought you couldn't make it because of your mom?" Colleen shrieked as she ran to hug her boyfriend. They all laughed. Zach went to hug Ashliegh and Haven ran to Jason "Haven. You look beautiful." Charlie said with his cute little country accent. Haven blushed and smiled. "Thank you" she said with a grin on her face that said it all. She was the happiest she has been in a long time.
    Ever since her brother died two months ago she had been sad and moody. Wouldn't you be? She and her brother were close. And ever since the car accident she hadn't been the same. But tonight we got to be with the real Haven. We where all really happy to get the old her back.

    Torian's mom came running through with her camera taking pictures of everyone with their dates and all together. "mom your doing it again." Torian said with a blank expression on her face. "alright alright I will stop! Bye guys have fun. Girls! Be home by 12:30 no later!!" mrs. Day said with a smile as she opened the door for them to leave.

    They all piled in Zach's car. Ashliegh sitting by Zach in the front seat and the rest of them in the back. Everyone laughed and had a good time. Not knowing a thing would happen later. This would be the end of life as they knew it.

    Ehh not the best I have ever written. Comments are appreciated!! Thx!~A
     
  2. Anybody have any suggestions?
     
  3. This story sucks. I'm done with it
     
  4. Name: Kaelynn
    Age: 14/15/16
    Hair color: dark brown
    Style: pop with some hippie and a tad of country, cant say no to aeropostale abercrombie or hollister
    Personality: fun to be with, kind, laid back
    And my parents are freakin rich so i get whatever I want
     
  5. Oh this one. I couldn't think of anything to do with it. So I stopped. You can be in reality check though