Chloe Louis Summers was a very plain girl. Everybody loved her and there wasn't a reason not to. She was perfect. Yet she was plain. ----- "INSPECTIONS!" The voice of Madame Penelope rang through the mansion. Girls of all ages lined up against the wall, shivering with fright. Madame Penelope held a ruler in her hand and looked at all the girls standing in a straight row. "Kristy, what is in your hair...?" Madame Penelope raised the ruler and pointed it to Kristy's hair. Kristy touched her hair and saw that a small speck of dust lay in her palm. "I-it's a sp-speck of d-dust Madame P-pen-nelo-pe...." She gulped and Madame Penelope stared at her. "Very Well. This mansion IS a bit dusty..." She smiled at Kristy and walked off. Kristy stared at me, "Chloe, what happened to Madame Penelope?!" Kristy was a 5'7 blonde, I was a 5'7 brunette. She had hazel brown eyes and I had violet ones. We both had pale skin and we would always laugh. Kristy was my BFF. "No idea Kristy." We were about to walk away until Courtney grabbed our shoulders, she was also our BFF, and we were sisters. "Madame Penelope! QUICK!" She dragged us to the stair case and Madame Penelope's corpse lay there. Madame Penelope's eyes were dull white, unlike her black ones. Her mouth was open, like she was attempting to scream before she died. Her hair was sprawled everywhere, unlike the bun she always wears. And behind her head was a big hole, where blood came out and was everywhere on the floor. The gross part was we could see her brain. "CALL THE COPS!" I yelled at everybody around me, and they all obeyed. Everybody ran everywhere, we created chaos. Three girls were hastily dialing a number, two were screaming and yelling and pulling their hair off. Five girls were frantically throwing their notebooks and papers everywhere. I just tsked and walked to a corner and was about to dial 911 until somebody stopped me. "FREEZE!" Three boys from the nearby Winston Academy broke down the front door and were holding guns. All the girls stood there shocked. I walked up to the three boys and asked, "Well Sherlock, got any clue of who killed Madame Penelope?" They just ignored me and backed off, revealing a real detective behind their backs. "Hello. I am inspector Winston. Also known as headmaster Winston."
I immediately curtseyed and let him In. He pat my head and smiled. I smiled back at him and let the three boys in. They showed no emotion. Just loyalty. I closed the door, skipping a little until I saw Miss Penelope's corpse. "Hmmm... Will, we have another dead teacher. Call all students." He nodded and turned away, walking out of the school. "Sir, what do you mean by another...?" He looked at me sadly and replied, "Our teacher, Mister Earl was killed. His neck had a mark. A mark of the... Vampire." I stared at him, dumbfounded. "Vampires sir?" He nodded. "It's a fang mark. Or most people or familiar with bite." I was scared. Then I asked, "Then why do they have a displayed brain?" "Aha my dear, a big wound on the head to fool people that the murderer kills by making a hole in the head, but the bite mark is tiny. So tiny in fact you can almost NOT see it. So... Way to keep suspcioun off themselves. Well done indeed." I looked at him, so did the rest of the girl's boarding school. "My dear, you will have to live with the boys until the culprit is found. The boys will protect you." We all nodded and walked out of the boarding school with Headmaster Winston, leaving the police to take care of the corpse. ---- At the boy's boarding school ---- "Welcome girls, to Winston Academy!" He showed us a very big castle, cream colored and had the smell of fresh roses, unlike our gothic mansion. He led us inside where all the boys were lined against the wall. "Good. A group of six in each room." He motioned all the girls into their groups, whilst me, Courtney, and Kristy were in one together. Kristy and Courtney pointed to the guys that were walking towards us. "Hello. I'm Will. That's Joao and that's Nicolae." Nicolae and Will looked the same except that Will was blonde and his face looked more squared. Nicolae and Will were both 6'1, had hazel brown eyes and had curly hair. Joao had long hair tied in a pony tail. Their uniforms looked rather fancy. Like when you were a king in a fencing competition. But this is 1745 and ours weren't that plain either. Our dresses were black and white, like a monochrome clown style. Courtney nudged me and whispered into my ear, "I'm taking Will. Kristy wants another dude called Joshua and you're taking mr stud muffin Joao." I cursed but Joao wasn't that bad looking. He was 6'3 and his eyes were silver, and his skin was pale white. He seemed to be interested in me and I smiled. "Hello Madame Mosioeur.." ---- Awful at french, blah blah blah. Lol.
I smiled at Joao and looked over at Courtney and Kristy. They were both talking to two guys. Courtney was talking to Will whilst Kristy was talking to somebody with the EXACT look as Joao. To make sure it wasn't him, i looked back at the Joao who spoke to me. He was smirking and said, "Oh, don't need to worry. That's my brother, Jack." His voice sounded soo... Dreamy.... Then I snapped back to reality. So what if a hunk had a nice portuguese accent? He read my mind! "No, I am not a mind reader." He was grinning now and I playfully slapped his arm. "You just did!!" "Well by the look on your face it was pretty obvious." I smiled at him and he took my hand. "Shhh... Quick, against the wall. Winston's back." He grabbed my waist and spun me over, and before I knew it, I was against the wall. "BOYS! As you may have noticed, there's murder afoot. Girls, you will be assigned to the boys and they will be your new roommate for the rest of the year." The girls looked at each other shocked. They weren't used to being with boys. Some of them were even lesbians. I was looking at Kristy and Courtney until Joao took my hand. "We're going to be roommates." I looked at him and shrugged. I turned back to see Courtney and Will blushing. Kristy and Jack were smiling and holding hands. I think they were about to kiss until Joao took my hand too. Then he did the unthinkable. He kissed me. I was about to stare at him until... "OK. BOYS! GIRLS!" He assigned the girls to each different guy and it seems as though me, Joao, Jack, Kristy, Courtney and Will were stuck together in a room. ---- Part one! I swear, this is a mystery and romance. . Any critism is welcome!
I would be soooooo effing excited if i had a cute boy as a room matee.. U know what that means every night!!! LOL
FUCK YOU ALL FOR BUMPING THIS /megasobsibtopillow Girls can have whatever the fuck sexuality they want. Same goes to guys. Lesbians, bisexual, straight, whatever the hell. Doesn't mean shit. :|
I think you have the story all down, just a little more extra detail when they are talking would be appreciative.Chloe Nice story, and I can't wait what's going to unravel.
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You know what no My stupid imagination had this chick become a detective and she solves this dumbass mystery which involves her bff's boyfriend being murdered by some serial killer who imitates a vampire by marking its victims and she finds out its the guy she likes who is also stalking her bff and THEN SHE KILLS HIM AND EVERYONE DIES ily2
So it's done? Well, you can always add twists. All in all, I always love your stories Chloe. They bring out real emotion from a different perspective and I want you to know you are an amazing person. No matter what.