Hi, I promised you guys I would write a story for you. Well, I didn't promise so much as you guys wanted me to. Well, some of you. So here is what I managed to work out so far.? ------------------------------- "After the rebels started invading the kingdom of Niche, the King sought advice. At the time, I had none to offer, so I fled. I searched worlds and universes on what to do and how to help but to no avail." recounted the old man to an obviously bored woman. "It took me a long time to find anything until I reached a certain universe." "You see" he continued, "this universe was far more advanced than our world but was ravaged by years of countless wars. Their technology was so far advanced, I couldn't believe my eyes. I decided that one of these machines could help bring victory to the kingdom so I took one in secrecy. Unfortunately I had no idea how it worked so I traveled and practiced until I figured out how it worked." "Oh my god" interrupted the woman, "Do you ever stop telling the same story over and over? Geez, you've told that story a million times. It doesnt even sound like it even happened" The old man only sighed. Then all of a sudden, a young man burst in the room, sweating and breathing heavily. "Vash?" Asked the woman "are you alright? Is there something wrong?" "Aphrodite, we have a problem" replied Vash "We might need you too, Jopo" ---------------------------- To be honest, I dont think its that good right now, but as I do this more and more, in know that I'll get more into it and I'll definitely get much better. ? So I apologize if this isnt very good as Im very rusty but if you think this is somewhat decent, I'll take that and thank you. ?
I liked it but my only complain is that it was too short bruh. Hyperdrive dis and gimme 10k words worth of material kthx. Have fun!
Hey man, I did the best I could. ? I agree that its too short but not too many people asked to be in the story. The next one should be longer once I get more into it. ?
People who haven't read the old ones (me), here's a quick link. Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 Part 4 Part 5 Part 6 Part 7 Part 8