Good thread. Agree with the feedback part, should leave truthful comments, both posastive and negative. Just two things and both in all honesty may not be relevant to here. One yes a beginning middle and end, just remember not all ways in that order. Secondly and agin prorablky not to relevant to here. You dint nesscorly need a plot, last exit to brooklyn is a classic example. A number of short character pieces. Catch 22 barly has a plot at all other then the main character trying nit to fly.
Sorry I was writing that while trying to sleep at 5am I didn't proof it my apologies. The point I was making and I don't actually think is relevant to here is that yes u need a start a middle and end but not always in that order. Secondly a plot is always a necsiscity a character piece is just as valid. But I agree with the thread completely. Ow and the best way to become a better writer as James ellroy said is to read and write, simple as that.
Qin I would love you constructive criticism on my story The Dark Kiss, and anyone else who has constructive criticism. Thank you!!!
Bravo, it's true, I have just learned some stuff from you and I'll try to get this into my work. Thanks -Jake
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