I'm uprooting the oppression, As I notice the weird obsession. Too many motives to question. Should I make a big suggestion? What purpose does one have, When a greater being is present? Try to degrade and slander quality, Yet can't take me out of my element. Actions prove they're incompetent. They see I been the most dominant. Each who opposes fails miserably. It's been proven throughout history. Many high stat players use alts to rp, But for trolling they will mention me? I honestly enjoy acting a fool in wc. I'm laughing at the irony just lowkey. They know GREATNESS is permanent. Uproar, when I became an occupant. I gotta crush you and your silly team. Nightmare, I overpower your dream. I'm a wildfire and you don't want no smoke. Yea, I'm a troll, but your presence is a joke.
Because I am back on my bullshìt. And, I've noticed they want to do another PIMD rap competition. So here's my suggestion to the person in charge, have judges who understand the lyrics, find more competitors. I would've liked to see KeKe and the others compete as well. I finished reading the competition threads and it pìssed me off. What exactly was being judged? Chill told me to search Mariafierce a while back, so I did. Why wasn't DeadlyTwist a contestant to begin wit? Now, I am offering an idea to whoever is going to make the next competition. Wait at least 2 weeks to gather contestants from PIMD and KAW. Find better judges, no offense to anyone. Kefo and PIE are decent judges, I can't discredit their knowledge on literacy... but idek the others. Dig deeper, get more black judges, yes, I know it seems racist, but do it. It's our culture's music so find them. Also, make Dragon Lily a judge. She's mean, but very knowledgeable about poems. Now, hear me out, the last competition had several flaws such as the 25 point system, and basing shít off of favoritism. I suggest it's lowered to 5 points. Lyrical talent, delivery, message, creativity and originality. Before I continue to address many flaws, they all have different styles and whatnot, BUT... most people who don't write or aren't knowledgeable about similes, metaphors, personification, rebuttals, paradoxes and other shìt of literacy devices, didn't understand shìt. So now I ask you, let me help improve the competition. (@Chill the only 'cat' you've ever touched line was from Maria? Just asking) Anyways, as ive stated before, let me help make the next competition fair and exciting. I do NOT want to be a participant. I don't want to be a judge. I'm a spectator and someone who's interested in speculating friendly competition. Another thing, add rp noobs to it. Of course they're great writers. They do detailed rp all damn day. Think about it
READ THE PARAGRAPH IT CLEARLY ISN'T ABOUT YOU. READ, GIRL. READ, GIRL. READ THAT SHÍT. TAKE A GOOD LOOK AT THAT PARAGRAPH. (Somebody hold her eyes open and make her READ it)
Could you swear on your mother's life that my poems are terrible? Even tho she can't die if you swear her upon a lie, would you do it? What if it was possible? Would you still do it? Swear on her life that my poems are terrible.
I won 2 years in a row... just so you’re aware and there were three rounds each year. I did not lose a single round either year and some of my verses were against multiple people at the same time. The cat phrase is a common one... do you live under a rock? You’ve seriously never heard that before? The same as referring to a person named Richard as Dīck for short? It is common. Which is why it’s so hard to take you seriously sometimes man. You talk about battle rap as if it is poetry. It’s not that I used the same phrase... it’s how it applied. In her verse she’s clearly shooting from the hip. In my verse, I’m using the line to directly attack your age and experience in context with other things I said within the same flow and rhyme scheme. There is a difference. Although literary devices are used occasionally, there is much more to it than that. Literary devices go more along with poetry and formal academic prose... you have to know when to use them and how. It’s like icing and sugar... you shouldn’t have too much and in some cases it may not be appropriate at all. For instance, alliteration. When people do A,B,C raps... King Los, Papoose, Daniel Radcliffe... in a battle rap setting, that would be extremely corny and a rebuttal against it would destroy it in two bars easily. Those are the basics... if you are trying to show mastery of one skill as the basis of why you should be considered great, you’re going to look like a teacher... not an expert. This ain’t that... and that ain’t this. I do not know any of the judges personally and I have come to recognize them in forums, but when I read the lines bar for bar it is clear to me that I won for several reasons... not just favoritism. It does them no good to vote for me... just because. 1. I stayed true to my style from the very beginning. I never switched up because of anyone else and if you look at the previous year I did very similar things each round.... consistency. 2. I was never phased by anything anyone else said in my verses. The biggest proof of an L for me was when the other contestants... including KAW people that didn’t even sign up at first basically changed up how they were rockin AFTER they saw me writing and only went back to their style once I called them out. Plus, I instantly became the main target of everyone before the second round even began... I addressed everyone individually within the same post. My one verse to their... sometimes four equally mediocre and non PIMD related posts. 3. Rhyme scheme, flow, links, and references, and I followed the rules and found clever ways to use pimd related things from all over the game to insult my opponents. I even at one point started insulting their styles subliminally by making references to 8 mile because it seemed like they didn’t rap before they watched that movie. 4. I made it sound easy. While everyone else was trying to over do it and force themselves to use the same techniques I am known for (horrible attempts btw), I gracefully moved on to my next method of attack. The first round I baited with flow and rhyme scheme, the second round I attacked skill and history, the third round I attacked character and then displayed skill and finally told them they all sounded like watered down versions of me. Revealing to all that they took the bait. I can assure you... no one else planned out their battle strategy this way. They just simply tried to out rhyme me. That’s how I know they don’t really do this that often. 5. I made sure I didn’t need to explain myself. It doesn’t matter how much slang you can use or how many words you can grab out of the dictionary if you can’t use them effectively to communicate your point. There is not a single moment where any of my verses question whether I am better at what I am doing than any of my opponents. The others at some point all had the same flaw... they said... “You’re not as good as everyone thinks you are.” In some type of way. Lack of confidence in your own verses is a guaranteed W for your opponent.... No matter how garbage you think they are. 6. I never went off topic for too long. The guys from KAW especially are horrible with this... so many wasted bars. Each one you use should count. Get to the point with purpose and quickly. People lose interest fast... even judges. If they have to try and figure out where you’re going with it ...every four bars they are eventually just going to skim through it. 7. Never take too long to submit your rebuttals or verses. If you are given 2 days... submit in 18 hours or less. Otherwise you will be at the mercy of whoever drew first blood... even if your rebuttal is fire... it will be difficult to gain back the ground you have lost. I am attacked unprovoked often... so I have learned to deal with this very well. Strike quick, strike hard, strike accurately, and make your last line as final as possible... leaving them with as little to say back as possible. (I did this with you too... when I told you to do what you do best and tell a mod to come and lock the thread) 8. Realness. Rhyme in a way that makes people want to hear your voice or rap themselves. It is true that you may be able to make your words flow over a beat but your readers sometimes have a desire to “rap along” instead of just read along. It helps quite a bit if the only information people can get about you is consistent with what you are doing. I never talk down to my readers, and I try to make them feel included without speaking for them. Believe it or not, it gives people a sense that they are the ones that wrote those words... or they were thinking them and you took them from their minds. It’s weird but... it’s my method for keeping things relatable to as many people as possible without compromising my own integrity. 9. Is it convincing? If it was a tie in the battle lyrically... naturally... the judges are going to find another category to base their decision on. Unfortunately, most of my opponents have displayed or demonstrated that the type of person they are on a regular basis is very far from who they are in their raps. I have a long list and history of forum posts where I stay on some RNS in every discussion and a long list of raps where I get creative lyrically. So my readers somewhat already know what they are going to get when I do my thing... and no matter how many times they have seen me do it... they cannot wait to see it again. That is clutch. I don’t care if they pick all black judges, all hard rock judges, or alien judges. I might not always win, but I’m going to be hard as hell to ignore. Some of the people in last years battle were very easy to ignore. I hope they bring better bars this year. I hope this has addressed all of your concerns.
Sometimes I wonder, chill. Why are most of your posts 10+ paragraphs long?. People dont really have the attention span to read all that unless there's some damm nice coding added to it.
To answer your question. I answer the question(s) I am asked effectively and thoroughly. The person(s) my words are meant for will read them all.
The point I'm trying to make is... THE COMPETITION HAD NO REAL RULES, REGULATIONS, AND DECENT JUDGES. Instead of a free for all, let 2 people battle it out at a time like a real rap battle. I've addressed your lines that several others have used, when is why I said creativity and originality need to be considered. It's not dat I'm dissing you. You misunderstand me. Shít like this needs to be structured better, not just chaos. Many were a no show. 2-3 weren't even writing anything at times. By the way, just because I don't have kids at this age like some teens do, doesn't mean that they haven't been swallowed by someone else before... all Imma say about the cat line...