Who knows what I’m trying to do here

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by ll-UnhingedStellar-ll, Dec 28, 2017.

  1. I’m just a fellow,
    Living in the garden of misery,
    This garden is also a maze,
    A maze to a forlorn of grief,
    Where flowers formed lemons
    and found sweetness and bitterness
    make their way through.

    Who knows what I’m trying to do.
    Should I embrace the sweetness in front,
    or should I run,
    Because sweetness will someday
    form into bitterness.

    I.e. I’m here not to gain more and more haters like my last thread did.People are thinking why not I just post to an app called poetry.I did it here because I can.DO NOT reply if you find it useless.Make it go out of active topics
     
  2. This would probably have more positive comments in the “fan creation” section of forums.
     
  3. If you love poems that much then create one that will inspire you.
     
  4. It didn’t actually inspire me I just love the imagery or what people call it ‘lines’ or ‘sentences’
     
  5. I hope so
     
  6. This reminds me of ChocolateThunder's threads - minus the drama.
     
  7. was just about to say this needs more drama lmao
     
  8. Is this another one of Jaco's personas¿
     
  9. Yup this totally need more drama I just started even
     
  10. Jaco’s? Who?
     
  11. That’s how I get inspired by
     
  12. Jaco = ChocolateThunder
     
  13. you're cancelled. next.
     
  14. Really? Didn't inspire you but you get inspired?
     
  15. Let’s say I got the idea from it.Whatever it was.I’m not inspired by poems.I don’t wanna debate anymore on this
     
  16. I didn't mind this one. I didn't care for the flow of how the lines read but wasn't bad IMO.
     
  17. Hmm, if there was a poetry battle between Thunder and this guy... who would win? ?
     
  18. That's a hard ass question