4/10 left side is great, idk what happened to the middle and the right Youre also missing some things
Your Dorm seems really mish-mashed together. 5/10 Lots of chaos. But I know you're from India and all your Diwali shelves is killing it and the bookshelf makes it look so pure so I'll give you a 6/10. You need theme, you're getting there, you certainly found something that you can embrace which is good. Just keep working at it