Shhhhh

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by DoughEyes, Jul 14, 2011.

  1. Tell me, are you satisfied with what you see?
    Do you enjoy that earth-shattering sorrow you experience when you get too close?
    Silly girl, who could ever want you?
    Dreaming girl, you let yourself get too high up in the clouds
    No one will help you
    No one will save you
    Sit pretty and play pretend
    Let those shackles envelop your skin
    Don't tell me you don't enjoy the sorrow
    Hush now, don't struggle
    Savor the tears that stream down your cheeks
    The wrenching pain that makes you fall in pain
    You, with flawed ugly skin, who could ever want you?
    Who could ever need you?
    Forgettable girl, giving yourself a place you don't deserve in the world
    Hush now, you're letting things show
    Don't cry to me in sorrow, you know it won't falter
    Delusional girl, giving yourself an identity you don't deserve
    Giving yourself a mask you dont own
    Dont you see? You're all alone
    You are and always will be annonymous girl
    And annonymous girls don't matter in this world
    Silly girl, quit your crying, you know you're dying, so stop trying
    You'll forever be in your own world
    Away from the warmth, far away from any worth
     
  2. Everybody deserves something and a place to live. Who cares if they're ugly? It's important to have a good heart.

    Nice poem though.
     
  3. Ummmm, I'm not hating in anyone lol. This poem was about me last night
     
  4. . Thanks. U remind me of my life and Im crying. May God bless the lonely hearts...
     
  5. Great poemalthough it's sad
     
  6. I believe this really deserves a BUMP
     
  7. In a way this relates to my writing career on forums no one wants to read my story
     
  8. Great poem I must say
     
  9. Na-na-na na-na-na!!!
     
  10. *sniff sniff* 

    Des, for what it's worth I'm here for you if ever needed.
     
  11. This deserves a MAJOR BUMP
     
  12. Sadness overflows the veins.
    Blood rushes out, blood rushes in.
    Regret in your hearts, Vanity in your soul, Do look back and see the chaos you've made.
     
  13. Wow Des. That certainly said alot! Thank u for sharing! *hugs*
     
  14. This is soo touching. You deserve a bug award for this. It is heart touching and you are very good . I admire you for this. And dont ever feel that way everyone's beautiful their own. " Dont
    Let 'em say you aint beautiful. They can all get fuc*ked just stay true to you "