Broken (Warning!!! Original Free verse, Lyrics, Thoughts...

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  1. "You promised to do your best.
    You promised you'd never leave./
    You promised to never love anyone else....
    or to deceive./

    To always give your time..../
    You promised...
    you'd never lie.
    You promised if you had it
    and she didn't
    you'd offer your last dime./

    You promised....
    Yeah... right...
    you must have promised
    a million times.../
    You promised...
    So much...
    that those promises...
    Slipped...
    right through your mind..../
    And fell to the ground and shattered.
    That's why...
    she looks so down.../
    She stares at the broken promises
    You make...
    when you're not around./

    And heartbreak...
    It makes a sound....
    if you gave a damn
    you'd its cries.../
    As teardrops fall from the rose
    you tried to cheer her up with
    and it wilts
    before her eyes./

    You're a fool...
    no more than a coward that hides...
    during a war./
    This was a battle for her heart...

    ---
    What did you desert her for?/
    ---


    So take a good look in the mirror
    This is what lonely looks like/
    When you're afraid of what your own reflection looks like./

    Knowing she practically died...
    holding her breath
    for dreams to come true./
    and she's finally happy to no longer hear empty promises come from you./
    Was it worth it all of those nights she tried and tried to get your attention?/
    And you denied all of your true feelings....
    Protecting your pride your only intention./
    And you were scared to seem desperate knowing that you loved her too.../
    but never told her so you lost her...
    Dumb ass...
    the only loser is you./

    So while you sit... stare at her picture...
    Sip your liquor and act bitter.../
    Throwing salt and thirst with your snide remarks into the mixture..../
    I hope your soul burns in hellfire
    what you deserve...
    Is to never forget her/
    And I hope the last thing you do
    before you die from her stab wound
    to your heart
    is forgive her./
     
  2. Re: Broken (Warning!!! Original Free verse, Lyrics, Thoughts...

    I kinda dig it.
     
  3. Re: Broken (Warning!!! Original Free verse, Lyrics, Thoughts...

    I left out some words in the rush of emotions but I hope the moves that need it feel it. Thanks for reading️
     
  4. Re: Broken (Warning!!! Original Free verse, Lyrics, Thoughts...

    who hurt you op
     
  5. Re: Broken (Warning!!! Original Free verse, Lyrics, Thoughts...

    Enjoyed reading it.
     
  6. Re: Broken (Warning!!! Original Free verse, Lyrics, Thoughts...

    Nice read. :)
     
  7. Re: Broken (Warning!!! Original Free verse, Lyrics, Thoughts...

    trash
     
  8. Re: Broken (Warning!!! Original Free verse, Lyrics, Thoughts...

    Thanks for reading
     
  9. Re: Broken (Warning!!! Original Free verse, Lyrics, Thoughts...

    yes that crap was waste of time
     
  10. Re: Broken (Warning!!! Original Free verse, Lyrics, Thoughts...

    Two of your favorite things to do in one. Work with trash and waste time. Glad I could help
     
  11. Re: Broken (Warning!!! Original Free verse, Lyrics, Thoughts...

    is that even a comeback
     
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  13. Re: Broken (Warning!!! Original Free verse, Lyrics, Thoughts...

    Nice read...........................
     
  14. Re: Broken (Warning!!! Original Free verse, Lyrics, Thoughts...

     
  15. Re: Broken (Warning!!! Original Free verse, Lyrics, Thoughts...

    There are some secrets I'll take with me to the grave.
     
  16. Re: Broken (Warning!!! Original Free verse, Lyrics, Thoughts...

    It was good 