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  1. Open text message
    To whom all I mess with/
    Couldn't reach you sayin it
    So I hope this stretches/

    In the past, I've taken L's
    With all of my ex's/
    So I'm taking these shots
    Hope I hit the x's/

    To the next ones/
    I won't answer
    skip the questions/
    I like class
    some of you have
    Skipped a few lessons/

    Gave you my heart
    That's severance
    Forget the reference/
    So if you've abandoned me
    Please don't block the exits/

    My looks could kill
    My words are deadly weapons/
    I'm a step above most
    Not to be stepped on/

    I'm feelin blue...
    And like you're really
    Not to be stressed on.../
    Red (Read) is most likely
    What you will be left on/

    Someone who's only
    there part time
    Ain't worth wasting words on/
    I won't take your calls
    My challenge shows a different version/

    I'm aight
    I learned early
    drink till the hurts gone/
    And nothing's worth keeping
    If it can't be worked on/

    Those that haven't been through it
    Swear those are the worst ones/
    Tell you not to leave them
    don't... stay...
    Yeah... they're the first ones/

    I feel most like the most honest
    people are the cursed ones/
    Tell em straight up how you feel
    Them snakes get their curve on/
    ...

    It's amazing what you hear
    When you're the only one listening/
    So now I talk to myself
    The conversation's more interesting/

    It's amazing what you hear
    When you're the only one listening/
    So now I talk to myself
    The conversation's more interesting/
     
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  3. Thanks, I'll try to do better next time
     
  4. or quit while you reached your peak
     
  5. no one reads your crap
     
  6. Thanks for clicking and posting then
     
  7. You should stick to rp. Trolling isn't working very well for you.
     
  8. dont get offended now kiddo
     
  9. It's okay :) you just need more practice. don't stop writing!
     
  10. It's was good, don't mind these illiterate imbeciles!
     
  11. Read the first stanza then saw gross. Didn't wanna look any further.
     
  12. Thank you. One day I hope to be as good at writing as you are.
     
  13. Thanks for reading
     
  14. I never do mind them. If you don't spell it out completely for them, most of the time they miss it.
     
  15. I liked it.. I mean I've liked all your raps or so lol,


    Do you ever say, when you write your raps/poems, you do it to a beat too?
     
  16. Yes sir. At this point I don't have to write them to any particular beat. However, I can usually make them fit over most conventional beats. Try listening to "Timeless" -A Boogie just the instrumental for this one.

    The one I wrote for Harmony and her passing, I did over a couple beats and sent to Raf. I was hoping other people with writing and singing talent would collaborate on a track but, none of them showed up when it was time. I produce orignal tracks and perform original songs over another app often. PM me and I'll give details.
     
  17. Damn.. that woulda been dope.. a song for harmony.. 
     
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