okay so, I found this poem while I was bored and was going thru some diff kinds of poems? usually that's what I do when I'm bored?#borednessbringsoutthebestofyou? WAKE UP! Fear is rushing through my body My heart is freezing of dispair Cold shivers down my spine Trying to wake up, desperately This has to stop, I can't take it Breathing fast and shallow Trying to keep it all together Agitation is breaking my spirit Images rushing by I have to get out of this Can't take this much longer My mind switched to standby A nightmare so horrifying Fear and pain so deep I have to wake up! Except.... My eyes are wide open and I'm not asleep... First time coding? hope it doesn't fail? and if it do, then I apologize for it in advance :cry: Have a great day y'all (☞ﾟ∀ﾟ)☞
It's all over the place:descriptives are being haphazardly sprinkled without any development of the theme.