My brothers best friend

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by roleplaygirl18, Aug 25, 2016.

  1. One night my brother invited his Friend Louis over and they played video games all night little did I know he had a crush on me.While they were upstairs playing games I was in the living room watching a horror movie and I didn't know that he was here so I had on my bra,unzipped sweatshirt,and a pair of high waisted jeans.He comes downstairs to get a drink and looks over at me and stands beside me.

    Louis: Wow u look gorgeous

    I got scared not even knowing that he was there and I look at him.

    Katlyn: When did u get here and thx

    Louis:I've been here for at least 4 hours.I've been upstairs playing games with Ur brother.

    Katlyn:Oh wow I never even noticed I feel so dumb right now.

    He goes to get a drink and i keep on watching the movie.As I start to zip my sweatshirt up he says...

    Louis:Don't do that, keep it unzipped you look cute like that.

    As I liked him i was feeling awkward and nervous but I left it unzipped still not knowing he liked me but I had a little feeling that he did.

    Katlyn: ok I guess ill leave it unzipped then...

    He gets a drink and some batteries and heads back upstairs.

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    If u guys have any suggestions plz tell me them and I will continue on with this thx
    Love from,
    Katlyn
     
  2. RE WROTE THIS GO CHECK OUT NEW ONE
     
  3. I should finish it
     
  4. Ok
     
  5. Why?
     
  6. Where can I find the new one