Hello guys! First time posting here! I'm actually a writer trying out my chances here too! This is a small part of my original novel The Body Of Desire. Angels VS Hunters. She's an Angel, He's her hunter. He will do anything to have her head but when destiny pushes these two together they have to overcome their long feud. Read to find out what happens. Romance and suspense novel. I can post some parts here so you guys can have a feel to it and if you want more the rest is on an app called Wattpad. You can wall me for more information! Here's the first chapter ? •~•~•~•~•~•~Chapter 1~•~•~•~•~•~•~• "Chief, they're tracking us down. They know what we're doing. We have thirty deaths since last month" said Allek The rest of the team started murmuring between them, giving their opinion. I gave a heavy sigh, looking down at the big old map of Las Vegas. "We knew this already, Allek. And we already know they're hunting us down. But they know we're tracking and killing them if we see them" I spoke loud and calmly. My voice echoed through the dusty, rocky room and it made everyone shut up. I stared down at the map. "But sir, their power is increasing by the hour. After last night kill, your men are exhausted. You can't send them for another kill tonight. We'll lose too much p-" "You don't tell me what to do, Allek" I raised my voice, cutting him off mid-sentence. He took a step back, looking at me. "But sir, I'm trying to help. Be reasonable. Your men need to rest. And we need to recruit. We're about to get out numbered-" "I'm not gonna rest until every single dirty angel is dead, rotting in hell where they all belong!" I snapped, turning my glowing eyes at Allek so fast everybody behind him took several steps back. Except him. He's never afraid of me. He doesn't disrespect me...but he doesn't cower either. My team looked between us, waiting for the next move. I exhaled slowly, trying to control my temper. These moments...i just feel pure hatred toward the disgusting pest called Angels. "I apologize, Chief. I'll retreat now if you'll excuse me" he said calmly, a look passing between us. It said 'We'll talk about it later'. "You're free to go" I told him, trying to act like a leader in front of everybody else, and went back to looking back at the map. He put his fist over his chest and gave a quick bow before he walked away, taking some of my men with him. I studied the map carefully. There must be a way. I just need to be discreet and think like them "Sir, are we still going with the plan?" i heard Christiano ask calmly. After some seconds i gave a slight but firm nod "Tonight, my men will enter The Venetian through the casino and will shoot every damn Angel in there. I don't want any humans dead. I find out you guys shot down a human and i will personally cut every finger with a rusty serrated knife from the kitchen " i said with my authority voice. The thirty something people that were around me gave respectful nods "Christiano and Mikhailo, you know what to do. My instructions were exact and, together with Allek, i want you to bring me the head of three royal Angels. Each" i said straightening up and looking at my best two fighters that remained in the room. Christiano and Mikhailo stood side by side, looking at me. "Yes, sir" they said in unison but in different heavy tones of voice. I gave them a nod and lifted my fist to my chest. They followed my example and bowed to me. Tonight we'll finish some dirty Angels C~A~C~A~C~A~C~A~C~A~C~A "Everything ready, sir" said Allek behind me. I was finishing loading my crossbow and putting my four guns on the holsters at each side of me. "We're ready" I said and walked out of the meeting chamber, strapping the crossbow around my chest and leaving it handing on my back. "Sir, we have forty-eight coming with us now. Fifty more will join us in an hour to give us time to sneak in" reported Christiano, joining Allek and me in our walk to exit the old abandoned medieval cathedral that was now our home. The home of every Hunter. When we walked out through the big arch that signaled the exit I saw my forty-eight men standing , waiting for us, prepared with their guns, swords and archery. I didn't have to say anything. Everybody knew what they had to do. See an angel, the opportunity is open, they shoot them. It was Allek, Christiano, Mikhailo and I that had the hardest job. Find three royals from the Angelic race and shoot them down. That's...if there's royals in our casino tonight. "Caspian" I turned my head to the voice and saw Christiano beside me, extending something in my direction. My dagger I sighed and took the dagger slowly. My father gave me this dagger two days before he was possessed by an Angel. Then the angel stabbed my father's body, the angel still inside him, and it was my father who died instead of both. I looked at the dagger, reading the engraved words on the surface of the blade. I looked away and put the dagger on the holster attached to my hip and turned to the rest of my Hunters team "Let's kill some Angels tonight" •~•~~~•~•~ THANK YOU FOR READING! Excuse any grammar error! For any questions, reply or wall me! With love<3
I left a trail of stars on Wattpad for you ^_^ anyway,maybe in the first paragraph I think you missed out a full stop, but that's all I can really find