"Anyone?" she whispered gently in the dark as she ran her fingers across the wall, she couldn't see anything. As she ran her hand across the light switch, she smiled. "finally a light," she mumbled to herself, and quickly flipped it on. It remained dark, so she tried again. Still darkness. She sighed and tried to find a door. She came up with nothing. Just four smooth walls, her, and the darkness.
Anna. I like it. I really do. Some of the writers on fan fiction these days post pieces of crap, yet everybody says the piece of crap is amazing. I honestly think this is good.
She felt something grab onto her shoulder, startling her. She reached her hand back and felt her shoulder. Nothing was there. "Is anyone here?" she asked. "I am here here with you Anna, I made you a promise, I will be with you always." A gently voice whispered back in her ear. She smiled to herself warmly and let out a sigh of relief. "I made you smile," the voice said gently. "but it's dark, how could you possible see me smile," she said curiously. "Because every time you smile, I can sense it, and I can't help but smile."
"Oh well I thought you turned against me like all of the others," she said lowering her head in sadness. "no I could never leave you Anna, you mean way to much to me." the voice replied. Suddenly she heard a quiet and gentle movement and suddenly felt his soft warm approach hers slowly. "I love you," she whispered softly smiling against his lips. " I love you to," the voice said lovingly.
I love the mystery in the begging. But I'm wondering what this story is mostly about. I love it! Are you a writer because this is extremely good! Continue on the story if you can please. Thanks.
Yah it hasn't got the meaning in it yet u will find out. And yes I will continue I will post more later