Human...kind of

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by BreeTanner135, Jul 6, 2011.

  1. Ch 1 F'ING YESTERDAY...
    I was a normal teen, I OBSESSED over anything that involved Taylor Lautner half naked, I loved Train and Taylor Swift, and I went to school. Everything was fine up until yesterday.Why yesterday? What happen?? The following happened.

    I was told I was adopted. I'm adopted because my parents were hunted and killed... 704 years ago because they weren't human. I more than less likely just killed my best friend. My boyfriend is the great great grandson of the mental people who turned my grandparents into various types of super humans. Apparently I have unknown powers and anger problems and will kill someone when I get mad. I'm never going to talk to anyone I've met in the past 14 years, except maybe my ex and that's to kill his family. I'm not the only one so I have to live with freaks that already know everything about... Superhumans? O yeah and apparently I was reset. WHO THE F*** KNOWS WHAT THAT MEANS. And last but not least a lot of people are trying to kill me. So today I meet the freaks... great!

    Ps~most of the characters come in Chpt 2 if UR not in by then ull b in by chpt 4:)
     
  2. When r u gonna upd?! LoL this would be interesting! Reminds me of maximum ride the books :3
     
  3. You should write more :)
     
  4. You do need to write more
     
  5. Thank u today will b updated alot:3
     
  6. Yeah, it reminds me of maximum ride too
     
  7. Chpt 2 part 1
    Wtf...
    So I've been driving for about 36 hours, and the driver pulls up to this tiny cottage in the middle of no where(an empty forest). I step out and see this adorable little fox prancing around, it spots me and runs. I look back to see the car is gone so I walk in the house where there's 3 people just chillin on a couch.
    There's this boy with dark brown hair a scary red eyes against pale skin-he seems detached even though he was laughing with the other 2-and a cute boy with dusty blonde collar length hair and vivid green eyes holding a girl with long straight jet black hair and pale dog like blue eyes. She was incredibly beautiful with pale flawless skin and a perfect stature she was tall but not as tall as the tan lanky boy beside her, there was one thing a little off though- she had razor sharp little teeth aka fangs.
    They all see me and start asking things and saying things.
    "Your not the only one to he reset, Dan was also, he's-" the cute boy said.
    "you'll feel right at home, wow you've changed this isn't what you normally get reset as. I'm sure you'll-" The beautiful girl said.
    "Ok knowing you you'll try to be a leader guess what your not-" The red eyed boy said and OH! I almost punched him.
    "Wow ok I really don't want to be any where near you freaks right now so if ya don't mind I'm gonna go met this Dan you talked about, maybe he's sane." I said as I walked down a hall.
    The house was a normal house had a nice kitchen a small living room with a tv and couch bathrooms and like 5 bedrooms. I looked in each til I came to the last one and found 'Dan'.
    "Um... Hey I herd your new to eh?"I said standing awkwardly at the door, and I kept hearing things like a skipping track I was getting a head ache when he glanced up.
    "Oh your new to? I guess they told you I'm Danny who are you?" he asked, and I walked in shutting the door and sat next to him on his bed. He was cute with flat black eyes and messy long black hair, he wore a hoddie and headphones around his neck.
    I smiled and said, "Im Jessy, those guys are freaks." I laughed he agreed and we started to get to know each other. We were alike and I really liked him it seemed to be awhile when I heard a bang and someone talking. I dismissed it because Danny was about to kiss me, we leaned in so close when I hear-
    " YOU DIDN'T TELL HER HE IS HER BROTHER!?" I push Danny away and jump from the bed and he asks whats wrong.
    "Your my BROTHER!?" I screech, so loud the window cracks. I run back to the living room. There's more people now, a girl with deep evergreen tree green hair and neon green eyes and a man hold the cute blonde boy against the wall by his shirt. Everyone looked at me and Danny who was behind me.
    I look at the man, he was HOT- his jaw squared off, big eye that looked like liquid gold on fire, messy curly brown hair that had natural red throughout, he was the tallest of them and wasn't as muscly as the red eyed boy but was very tone. He was smiling sweetly at me even though one of his hands now had a death grip on the cute boys neck. I was freaked out.
    "Yous guys are freaks." I stated bluntly, as soon as the words were out red eyed boy stiffens and jerks his arms out in front of him letting fire blow straight from them towards me.
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  8. Sorry that was long>.<
     
  9. What just happened?!
     
  10. Lol idk if I shud post part 2 today that was really long
     
  11. Whoa.

    No Bree it's not that long ^_^

    But I'll b waiting! Lol
     
  12. Sorry for all the mistakes in spelling I typed tht quickly... I'll put up part 2 of chpt 2 later:3 it's in a different POV to begin w/ but goes back to Jess(aka Bree) in the end
     
  13. Chpt2 part 2 watching from a safe distance
    I thought she was going to drain me but she didn't apparently she wasn't reset but her parents didnt want her to know. I knew she wasn't in her own head and I'm guessing she's in mine- seeing how we ARE best friends. I watch from in the kitchen behind the 'window' that looks into the living room as Bree defends herself.
    Her grey eyes ice over on the iris and pupil, her hands flick up and a shield of ice forms then shoots forward towards storm. He shoots back into the wall.
    I laugh and look at Bree, she now looked like her self the pale grey eyes were against a healthy pale skin instead of the darker olive tone her host had, and her hair was super long straight-ish wavy and almost white it was so blonde instead of the previous dark blonde/light brown shoulder length frizz she called hair, and her height was back almost as tall as Tony.
    As she went back to her own mind I decided to scare her I turn into a fox and brushed against her leg.
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    I saw a hole that looked charred and ice particles in front of me as I slowly remembered what just happened. I felt something tickle my leg. Thinking it was a bug or spider I instinctively kick...hard. The same adorable fox I had seen earlier just flew into the wall next to the hole and fell to the ground. When it stood up it was the girl with green hair and now bright red fox ears atop her head. She helped the fire boy up and stared at me laughing. I smiled back, maybe they weren't that bad
     
  14. Don't worry eagle you guys are coming didnt u wanna b a bbad guy??
     
  15. Kl I like the story
     
  16. Thnk u hot em!! Ok the story gets actiony in chpt 4:)

    Chpt 3 voices
    I remembered everything that had happened but I don't remember doing it. I can even remember the noise the fire and ice made... The quiet voices in my head became more noticeable so I tried to listen. As soon as I made any attempt for them to get louder the hushed whispers became horrible screams in my head. I clutched my head in agony and fell to my knees screaming. I heard glass shattering and my voice so loud and so disgusting but mostly I heard screams. They became alarmed and louder so did my voice. I heard 1 voice over the others coming in cleaner and softer than the others. It said,
    " Bree, calm down-calm down-calm down" it echoed in a strangely soothing way."it's ok-ok-ok. Just stop thinking-ing-ing. Don't listen to them-ta them-ta them." I did as it said and everything became so quiet. I collapsed and I was lying on the floor my breath coming jaggedly. I was vaguely aware of the 5 people standing over me and the hands that grasped my shoulders as I slipped into unconsciousness.
    In my sleep I realized a few things. I knew all of them. I vaguely remember each, the fire guy was storm and his last living sister, the person that talked to me telepathically was Selina. The blonde boy was Conner and the hot dude was Anthony. The fox girl was Sophie who was using Seli to talk with me. She was explaining, we all have eternal mates my brother didn't have 1 but Soph was with Storm, Seli
     
  17. Srry I didn't coppy everything off clip board
    Chpt 3 cnt
    We all were born 740 years ago, our parents were genetically mutated into different things and died after we were born. Danny is only my half brother on my dads side. We never die we just get reset and our soul and mind find a baby host that would have a similar life to ours If we weren't super human. I'm the strongest super human, and the people who mutated our parents also created bad super humans to kill us I am the main target.
    We weren't the only SHs(super humans) there were more every where we just happened to be the best. One of our good friends was permi-killed (weaker SHs have only a few lives). We have a mission to avenge her.
     
  18. ......... Kool