THE YEAR 3000

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by MR_BIG_BAD_JONNYBOY, Jul 6, 2011.

  1. Its the year 3000 n I EM awoken by the glare of the beaming sun that rarely shine through the steel bars,I open my eye only 2 see the same view I seen for the past 3 years.
    The morning sound of fellow slaves rustling there blankets close 2 them, trying 2 escape the cold chills generated by the concrete walls n the free flowing aircon seeping from under the guards chambers,the sound of driping water echoes throughout the drains surrounding our bunk.
    "Will I ever understand y it is like it is" I mumble to my self as I turn over "signs" oh dad how did this happen? Y r they doing this? I reach under my cold worn down pillow pulling out a old half torn picture of my father stare at it trying 2 contain the million motions bottled up inside, I groan in frustration.
    "Hey jonny wats up with the picture" a nosey little voice gitters from a distance, that's Tyler a small 5"2 fella with short brown hair n dark brown eyes, I lean over n stare at him his beady little eyes fixated at the picture "it's none of your business Tyler" I replie I lean back over n continue to think I here his foot steps clicking on the hard concrete floor closing in behind me, I frown in frustration I sit up turn n yell "look Tyler piss of ok" I shouted it with anger .....only WAT I saw left me speechless my eyes widen n my jaw Droped.. But bu bu but.. It can't be.
     
  2. PERFECT!!!I love it!! AMAZING!!!
     
  3. LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
     
  4. Moooooaaaaarrrrrr!!!!
     
  5. WHAT SHE SAID!!!
     
  6. Wow sounds interesting
    I want more now
    Intriguing

    Hehehee Iv been reading the dictionary hence the long word

    Yer it's good

    Carry it on

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  7. YAY EM!!! I'm so proud of your bug words!!!



    Keep reading that dictionary!!!





    MOAR!!!!






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  8. It's awesome cause it's not a real dictionary it's got a normal word then lots of other words in stead
     
  9. unpresumptuous- lovely

    How kl is that for lovely -unpresumptuous

    Lol this dictionary is awesome 
     
  10. Haha I can't pre nouns it :))
     
  11. Poop lol em I was excited for a minute!!! LMAO haha ok back to topic of the thread



    who was behind jonny?



    His dad?



    The Easter bunny?



    .......





    JONNY DEPP?!?!



    All will be answered in the next update!!!




    Maybe.





    Idk. I'm not writing it
     
  12. Aaaaw but goin back to the topic of the thread is boring

    Back to indiscriminate talk

    ( random)
     
  13. I'm working on it lol
     
  14. Hahaha another big word em? Lol brings a teAr of joy to my eye lol hurry up and update! I love this story so far!
     
  15. can i be in ur story
     
  16. James!!!! WAT r u doing here I shout sending a panic throughout the cells, capturing the attention of, Miss Jess the guard for cell block D n C I look stunned into James tired eyes "but they took u?" "y did u talk for?" y did they let u back?."I told then everything I know jonny" his tortured voice says to me, Miss Jess notices from a distance our convosation n walks over tall n pretty with legs 2 match but a attitude 2 scare even the toughest of boys in here,with a stare that could make u whimper at your knees.
    "WHATS goning on over hear" as miss Jess runs her electric battern along the bars sending fear throughout the block, as she says"Jonny u causing trouble again" he voice so seductive yet so evil, i jump from my buck sending a thud ringing through the cells " so WAT if I em miss wat u gonna do? U cant keep me here forever" I boil over walking towards her fearless, I hear all the boys mumbling n whispering as I walk towards her. She stares at me with here dark seductive eyes I resist n continue to proceed towards her every step feeling like a mile, I stand against the bars tough n mighty but shakeing at my knees, she snarls at me as she is grips her battern in her hands. At that moment a loud ear draining rusty out of tune siren sounds it's the morning rollcall check in"common jonny let's go we can't be late this time" James says, "ok jame I wanna no what happen later tho ok?" I ask him, he noods his head as I push through to the front" James we gotta get up front we have to quick I need to see her"i say with a panic tone. It's crowded n overfill I grip James baggy shirt n pull him along, i reach the front n line up along side james, it's dark n dim with cheap lightglobs and a erry feeling surrounds the tired faces here.
    "Psssttt jonny"I hear a soft voice whisper from across the hall my eyes rapidly scan through the girls I "Pssttt over here!!!" I notice sophie a small 5"4 foot girl with dark black hair n olive tan skin with light blue eyes she's standing there with a cheecky smile I yell Sophie!, James puts his hand over my mouth" SHHHH jonny" u no the rules he says with a sturdy voice.
    "I whisper softly where is she Sophie? Were is Micky?" I say with a ega voice trying to contain my excitement.
     
  17. Interesting..
     
  18. IM RIGHT HERE!!!!! right here right here!!!!


    Hehe I love it!! I want more!!!