Post Your Best Poetry Here.

Discussion in 'Strategy' started by i_Too_Ch1ll_4_U_, Jul 29, 2015.


  1. Amazing
     


  2. Thanks. I did try to make it as great as possible.
     
  3. *handclaps* bravo
     
  4. Purify the wounds
    Sting through my limbs
    The breath stealing pain
    Of all my sins
    Part the curtains
    Bring down the light
    Mix water with salt
    On the table of the night
    The moon is pale and hungry
    I can hear her martyr's voice
    She sings the words to hymns
    Once carved upon the bread
    Broken into pieces
    Scattered for the birds
    Pigeons who survive
    Among the screams
    And the thirst
    Her song is like a knife
    Buried in my face
    The blood runs for
    All the winged babies
    Who grow to meet the night
    The table salted with stars
    And the moon's hungry light
    Purify my wounds
    Peal through my veins
    Take my breath and give it
    To the bread
    The broken
    The end
     
  5. that was really really emotional
     
  6. Gosh, why is everyone's poem so sad. That just hit me in the feels yo 
     
  7. One fish
    Two fish
    Red fish
    Grapes
     
  8. Sometimes

    Sometimes
    When I'm sitting alone
    I feel hopeless.
    That there is no body around
    No one to say hi
    No one to say bye
    No one
    But me.
    I'm alone and I love it.
    I'm alone and I hate it.
    I tuck myself away in the prison cells that are my deepest thoughts.
    It's dark in here
    I think out loud.
    It's dark in here
    But the lights are on, I say.
    It's dark in here
    The fire in my heart must have burned out.
    Cold I sit
    Without the means to love.
    Cold I sit
    Without anyone to warm me.
    Cold I sit
    Without the means to care that my extremities have gone numb from chills.
    I shake.
    I curl up into a ball of insecurity.
    Waiting to be burst open by the slightest touch of insult.
    There on my bedside table
    Lies the tool of the poet.
    It has been used recently.
    It's ink still shining like a red rose on the blade.
    The poet frowns as his canvas
    Once paper
    Now his wrist
    Flows with his newest work of art
    One poetic line
    Symbolizing how easily life is given
    How easily life is taken.
    Sometimes
    When I'm sitting alone
    I feel useless.
    That I am a hindrance to all.
    Get out of the way
    Shut up
    Go back to your room
    Why don't you help more
    You never finish anything
    They say.
    They can't be right.
    I am useful.
    I must make someone happy
    I must be a positive influence to something.
    But maybe I don't.
    Sometimes
    When I sit alone
    I think to myself
    What if I weren't here
    In this house
    On this continent
    Or in this world.
    Where would I be?
    Should I find my final resting place
    In heaven?
    In hell?
    Or will I find myself lost in the long history of nobodies that did nobody things.
    Sometimes
    When I sit alone
    I believe.
    I believe what they say
    I believe my thoughts
    I believe the injustice of this cruel reality
    Sometimes
    When I sit alone
    I fail to see that this world
    The one we live in
    Is changing
    For the better
    I'm not sure
    For the worse
    I fear too quickly
    Sometimes
    When I'm sitting alone
    I fail to see the beauty that darkness brings
    For in darkness your light shines vibrantly.
    I was introduced to your shining eyes.
    Sometimes became never.
    For I am never alone
    In darkness nor in light.
     
  9. Its basically giving everyone a chance to write their feelings in a poetry form. Kinda like how artist use music to talk about their feelings and tell their story.
     
  10. man... That's some really saddening poetry there. God Bless you.
     
  11. Read the last lines. It's a love poem. Ish happy in the end.
     
  12. Because I guess might as well post a somewhat more positive poem.


    Dreams

    It can be achieved.
    It cannot be achieved.
    It is attainable.
    It is unattainable.
    It will happen.
    It will not happen.
    It will not fail.
    It will fail.
    I will fail.
    I will not fail.
    I will not make it happen.
    I will make it happen.
    I will not attain it.
    I will attain it.
    I will achieve it.
    I will not achieve it.
    Perfection.
    Such an easy word.
    It rolls off my lips...perfectly.
    So beautiful I almost believe.
    Believe that it's possible.
    Believe that it will happen.
    That I will achieve perfection.
    The perfection that is promised.
    Promised by those who believe in me.
    But they believe in me
    Under the assumption that I am perfect.
    And perfect I am not.
    Never will I be perfect.
    I try
    To no avail.
    I pray
    To no one.
    And no one answers back.
    Answers with a resounding slap
    Spinning me out of the dream
    That said one day I could be perfect.
    I aim for perfection,
    Because aiming for the moon isn't good enough.
    I aim for perfection,
    Because that is the only way I could possibly deserve you.
    But I am not perfect.
    Never will I be perfect.
    Never will I deserve you.
    We can be achieved
    We are attainable
    We will happen
    We will not fail
    We are perfection.
     
  13. For All The Trees Who Lose Their Leaves

    What does it feel like when all your words are wrong?

    It is like a tree trying to be tall
    Every sound blows off a leaf
    Until it is bare
    And not really there

    So it waits
    And regrows
    Stand tall in their big glen
    With that sappy grin again

    The second time is sometimes worst
    The effort of trying again and again
    How many time do you let yourself be hurt
    How many times until it works

    The seasons are always fall
    The regrowth comes to a crawl
    You remain bare
    Pretend the breeze is not there

    Eventually you know your fruit is rotten
    Your flowers not sought after
    You grow back more than gouged bark
    Because the future is stark

    And you stand alone in your forest
    Small and deeply rooted
    Invisible to the other trees
    And from the breeze

    You always are rejected
    And were so unprotected
    So keep your head down
    And eventually your branches will stay full
     
  14. Ik but that beginning though...
     
  15. Oh why the hell not. Here goes nothing:

    It feels as though my conscience leaks,
    For every thought that passes by
    Another thought inside my mind
    Finds another way to die.

    Keeping faith is hard to sell,
    If only I could leave as well.
     
  16. bravo my friend. Bravo!
     
  17. that sounds more suicidal to me. Others might have an opinion. But bravo friend.
     
  18. Not necessarily. It could also be considered as a form of escapism rather than suicidal. However, art allows different forms of interpretation. Each to his own
     
  19. Understandable. Its still pretty good.
     
  20. The horizon meets my line of vision.
    I sigh and try to eye...
    thy who could guide my wisdom.
    I ask em to give my mind a listen

    Looking across the earths surface at those trying to find a purpose.
    Searching for tranquility,
    with all my ability,
    to find a place with no disturbance.

    Hold my piece...
    before I'd ever hold my peace
    for me to to speak so many peeps became deceased.

    It's time to rise up.
    I know I'm strong.
    I'm one of the survivors.
    So many good souls lost are still buried deep inside us.

    My pride clutched... forbidden to claim what was promised.
    Sick of the process.
    Categorize us guys as monstas.

    While all day behind closed doors they idolize.
    See my likeness and refuse to compromise...

    There no comparison because in broad daylight there's nowhere that I can hide...

    If I did desire.
    Say we're the same again
    Reply: I'm not a liar.

    The barriers are broken?
    Some say that I'm the chosen
    I say nothing when they do...
    Some things are best left unspoken.

    I inhaled and watched the sun dance across the ocean.
    Never worried about floating.
    Smiling down on everyone hoping;
    But showing no emotion.

    I envy that point of view...

    I wonder if the Sun feels sadness
    Watching earth's madness
    Believes that our world is savage.

    ...And just keeps its distance
    Feigning indifference...
    Waiting with open arms
    If our world would ask it for forgiveness

    If it would accept...
    My eyes blur because of the depth.
    So I captured the experience before I'd forget.

    I was not made to understand so what could I expect.
    So I did what came naturally and took the next breath.
    Stole another glance so that its beauty knows my respect.
    I thanked my creator for its time before I took the next step.